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Tall Ship - Part XIII

Saturday, December 15, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. The tale works to its climax as Hannah runs, and the crew chase. NEW CHAPTER

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“See?” Sam said, looking down at the little boy next to him. “I told you she’s okay.”

Ethan had his thumb in his mouth, biting on the pad. “’Kay.” He didn’t sound convinced, even though he was staring into the infirmary at his mother.

Sam sighed, bending down and lifting the boy onto his hip. He hadn’t had much to do with small children for a while, not since his daughter was little. Even visiting her and being made to hold her babies hadn’t prepared him for the experience of dealing with children like those on board Serenity. “Ethan, we’re doing what we can.”

“Misses Daddy.” His voice was indistinct.

“Yes, she does.”

The boy looked at Sam, his blue eyes piercing, full of sadness. “Doesn’t want us.”

“No, Ethan, that’s not the case,” Sam assured him. He looked around, saw the yellow sofa against the wall and went to sit down. Ethan climbed into his lap, holding onto his silk shirt with a tiny fist. “She loves you. Both of you. But she’s hurting so much that she can’t see how much she loves you, and we have to remind her.”

“How?”

“We talk to her. Tell her how much we care. That she’s not alone.”

“Make it stop hurting?”

He nodded. “We’ll try. But it won’t stop for a long time.”

“But we’ll be here.” Ethan’s little face was hopeful. “Can I tell her now?”

Sam glanced into the infirmary, where Simon was adjusting a drip into Freya’s arm, and Kaylee had hold of her hand. “In a little while. Why don’t you tell me what you want to say?”

“Want my Mama.” He bit his lip as a tear ran down his cheek. “Want to tell her Ethan loves her.”

Sam felt a knot tighten in his chest, and he took a deep breath, pledging silently to do all he could for this boy’s mother. “That’s –“

Zoe leaned in the doorway. “Doc!” she shouted.

Simon hurried into the common area. “What is it? Someone hurt?”

“Not sure. Get your bag.” She was gone in a swirl of leather waistcoat.

“Honey?” Kaylee watched as her husband grabbed his medkit. “What is it?”

“I don’t know

Comments
Saturday, 15 December 2007 11:28
It would be a lot easier for me to feel bad for whatsername, if she hadn't made that move to run away and keep them from seeing if 'ben' was really Mal.
I like the way this has run, it's a great arc, and done well. Especially how Mal fought to try and cling to the elusive wisps of memory that taunted him. It's a WINNER!
Saturday, 15 December 2007 11:29
Oh Wow, totally fabulous! My only regret is that Jayne and Zoe didn't kill the rest of Kendall's men but what the hell, not only did they get to Mal in the nick of time but now he remembers! Really REALLY enjoyed this to bits, can't wait to see the reunion between Mal and Freya and the kids. Bravo! Ali D :~)
Saturday, 15 December 2007 13:46
You know the thing that got to me most in this chapter? It was when Mal called Jonah Ethan when he went into protector mode. Lovely touch, that!
Saturday, 15 December 2007 14:35
Lost my comment. So I'll just simply say that I knew things would eventually be OK, especially when Mal called Jonah Ethan and that I do feel sorry for Hannah. She had a very human reaction to everything.
Saturday, 15 December 2007 15:11
Loved this story so much, especially all the little images you put in. Of Mal's constant struggle to remember and his flashbacks, of the viewpoint from all the kids, the very vengeful Jayne, the very, very bad guys. The trickiest was Hannah's very human reaction to be selfish instead of altruistic when faced with her inevitable loss. No one knows how they will react after loss and fear, but we all hope our better nature will prevail. Very well done. And glad Mal is finally back! On to more fluff!

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