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Tall Ship - Part XII

Friday, December 14, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Simon tries to save Freya, and Hannah learns about who Mal is. NEW CHAPTER

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It was the longest two minutes of Jayne’s life. Sitting next to Freya, holding her hand, hearing her breathing getting slower, shallower. He couldn’t look at her, at the almost smile on her face.

At last Simon dropped through the hole and took his place. He felt her skin, checking her pulse. “Show me,” he said.

Jayne held out the vial.

“Damn it.” He put the hypo he’d brought with him against her neck and plunged it home.

“We in time?” Jayne asked, seeing the others come down the ladder after him, crowding into the small space.

“I don’t … No!” He shouted, tugging the pin from the shoulder of Freya’s dress and pulling the front down, exposing her breasts.

“Simon …” Kaylee protested quietly.

“Her heart’s stopped.” The young doctor swiftly opened the other pack he’d brought with him, thrusting the needle between her ribs and injecting it as he felt it puncture the pericardium.

Kaylee thrust her hand into her mouth to stop from screaming as he withdrew the needle and began CPR.

They waited. Waited with no sound but the hard air Simon was forcing into her lungs, urging her to breathe on her own, counting between each one. Waited for an eternity.

Then a ragged noise. The noise of someone drawing a breath unwillingly.

Her eyes fluttered open, and she tried to focus. A man. Sitting next to her, his hands on her flesh … but it wasn’t him. Not him.

“No!” she cried out, barely whispering as she realised they hadn’t let her leave, wouldn’t let her go to him. She rolled over, away from them, bringing her knees up to her naked chest as she sobbed with despair.

In the small house by the beach, the sleeping man reached out, trying to grasp something, pull it into the safety of his embrace, even as the woman next to him dried his tears.

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Kaylee was shaking so hard she could hardly play the recording. They were all in the galley, all except Simon, who was sitting with Freya in the infirmary, checking no permanent damage had been done by the poison.

“Go ahead,” Zoe

Comments
Friday, 14 December 2007 10:00
Just as I was cheering that Hannah was finally doing the right thing she tries to run off. I hope Jayne catches up with the silly woman but at least now that there is even the hope that Mal is still alive there is no way Serenity and her crew will leave until they find him. Hooray! I can't wait to see how everybody reacts when they find the Captain and I am hoping and praying that when Mal sees Frey it will be that final nudge his memory needs to slot back into place. Please post the next part SOON, *dong ma*? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 14 December 2007 13:14
I have to sympathize with Hannah at least a little. Would be a hard thng to let go of our favorite Captain. But, at least she got the nerve to do it for a minute there!
Friday, 14 December 2007 15:18
Amazing the way you can capture so much emotion. Glad Freya was saved. I think there will be some repercussions from that in the future.
Friday, 14 December 2007 17:34
I'm glad Freya was saved too. And that Hannah has a conscience... I can't wait to see how this plays out. Please post the next part SOON!
Saturday, 15 December 2007 15:31
Great job in building up the tension!

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