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Tall Ship - Part X

Wednesday, December 12, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal and Hannah talk, and Jayne works it out. NEW CHAPTER

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Jayne didn’t have to wait too long. As the night wore on, Lily kept glancing at him, even as he played a hand of poker with some of the other men. Not that he had to turn to see her. He’d sat with his back to the wall, and every time she looked over, she could see him smiling faintly at her. Eventually, a couple of hours past midnight, she was spooked enough.

She crossed to the counter, beckoning the barkeep. “Bill, I ain't feelin’ too well. Gonna lie down for a while. Can you make sure no-one comes back to see me?”

“Sure. You need a doc or something?”

“No. Just a sleep. Bit smoky in here tonight.”

“Yeah, guess it is.” He shrugged. “And you do looked a trifle green ‘round the gills.”

She narrowed her eyes. “I've just got a headache, okay?”

“Sure.” He went back to shining his glasses. “Just let me know when you’re open for business again.”

Lily glanced over at the big man playing cards, but for once he wasn’t taking any notice of her, intent on studying his hand instead. Hurrying to her room she quickly changed her clothes.

Jayne stretched. “And that just about does me,” he said, tossing his cards into the centre of the table. “Ain't no way I'm gonna win tonight.”

“You sure? Just one more wager?” asked the small man in the grubby derby who put the big mercenary in mind of Badger.

“You’re only saying that ‘cause you got a heap of my coin in front of you.” Jayne grinned and stood up. “’Nother time, maybe.”

“Sure. Whenever you wanna lose, come on back.”

“Oh, I’ll be sure to.” Jayne picked up his jacket and shrugged into it, hunching his shoulders down inside before heading out into the night.

Five minutes later and Lily looked out of the back door, checking all around before closing it quietly behind her. She kept to the deeper shadows, her feet silent in her soft shoes, listening all the time in case someone was following. She paused as she reached the main street, tilting her head back and forth as she almost sniffed the air before being satisfied. Cr

Comments
Wednesday, 12 December 2007 14:34
Vengeful Jayne is a force to be reckoned with. Well Done!
Wednesday, 12 December 2007 14:53
“Somewhere out there is a woman. I don’t know who she is, or where, but I think I belong to her. And I’m not planning to be unfaithful.”

That line nearly choked me up.
Then Jayne got to kill someone and got my testosterone levels back up.
Great work.
Wednesday, 12 December 2007 17:41
Absolutely fantastic chapter!

Choking up at Mal's decision and then holding my breath as Jayne and the sheriff fought. What a roller coaster ride today!
Thursday, 13 December 2007 00:33
Absolutely brilliant! I knew the sheriff had to be in on it and the way Jayne got Lily spooked enough to tip her hand was masterfully done. So happy Jayne killed the *tamade hundan* and that Lily got her just deserts too. I loved Mal telling Hannah there was someone out there waiting for him even though he didn't know who and that he will not be unfaithful to her. Now that is a love burned soul deep. Just hope that Jayne or Frey finds Mal before anything else can go wrong for our BDMs. Freya needs her husband, Ethan his daddy, Serenity and her crew needs their Captain. Can't wait for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 13 December 2007 00:34
Ooops, I meant to type BDHs and my finger slipped! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 13 December 2007 02:56
Wow, what a chapter. You really outdid yourself with this one. What a roller coaster of excitement - of love and treachery. Great job on vengeful Jayne. Great job on poor Hannah and befuddled Mal. He may be confused, but he is still the same idealist who has to follow his conscience. A pure pleasure to read!
Friday, 14 December 2007 11:25
Oh hell yeah! Love it when Jayne goes medieval! Love it! Great job, simply outstanding!

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