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Tall Ship - Part IX

Monday, December 10, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Jayne suspects, Mal gets involved, and Freya apologises, but nothing is as it seems. NEW CHAPTER

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Jayne pushed through the door and into the bar, taking a deep breath of the smoky and alcohol laden air, feeling it fill his lungs, and headed towards the counter.

“Ain’t seen you in a few days,” the barkeep said, automatically pouring a beer. He pushed it across the wood. “Figured you’d upped and moved on.”

“Not yet. Still got some unfinished business.”

“With Lily?”

He shrugged. “Maybe.”

“Only she’s been moping around here like a wet weekend. Wondered if you’d broken her heart.”

“Not me.” Jayne drank half the mug. “She here at the moment?”

“I guess.” The barkeep didn’t seem that interested in keeping tabs on the women who worked his place. “In her room, I think.”

“Well, she ain’t mooning over me. She ain't got nothing I want.” He finished the beer, putting the mug back down precisely on the wet ring on the counter. “You know, I recall there was a feller looking for someone just a day or two ago. You see him?”

“A feller?”

“Big. Real big. Couldn’t miss ‘im.”

The barkeep nodded. “Oh, yeah. Came in, looking for his … what, cook, was it?”

“That was him.” Jayne turned to look at the customers. “What’d you tell him?”

“I didn’t. Comes in here, demanding to know if I’d seen this guy, and doesn’t even do the courtesy of buying a drink.”

“That’s terrible.” Jayne pushed his mug across and the barkeep refilled it. “And had you? Seen him?”

“Yeah. Coupla days ago. Got that scar on his face and everything, just like his captain’d said.”

“Really.”

“Just the once, mind. Funnily enough Lily made a play for him, and they went off to her room. By the time they got back they was smiling.” He laughed slyly. “Guess the scar didn’t put her off.” He moved off to serve someone else.

“Guess not,” Jayne muttered under his breath. He caught a whiff of a familiar cheap perfume, and turned his head. Lily had just stepped into the bar from the back. Arranging his face into a pleasant expression, he ambled over, coming up behind her. “Miss Lily,” he said, his

Comments
Monday, 10 December 2007 17:49
Glad he had that flash of Freya right at that moment! Whew!
Monday, 10 December 2007 20:10
I hope this ends well for Hannah. With Freya tettering off the deep end, shes lible to get shot before she can explain herself.
Monday, 10 December 2007 23:54
Whew, there you go again! Just tugging me back and forth.

Both Lily and Mr Kendall are hun dahns and need to learn a lesson. I just hope Hannah and the kids don't get hurt.
Monday, 10 December 2007 23:59
I am still betting on the killer being that Sheriff even though we haven't seen him yet. Nice and convenient the goal house being next to the whore house and I absolutely love how Jayne is taking the time to think everything through to catch the bad guy. As for Hannah, I think she has a whole pile of trouble coming her way with that nasty neighbour, which to my way of thinking means Mal has too. Really pleased Hannah didn't kiss him. Memory or not he has enough instinct to know there is someone somewhere for him, let's hope he soon remembers the rest. His family and crew need him. Ali D :~)
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Tuesday, 11 December 2007 13:06
Wonderful chapter and everything coming to a head nicely. Mal was so ... Mal in this! It was very easy to see this as an episode the way you wrote it.

Glad to see images are coming back to him more clearly. Glad to see Jayne is seeing the light too. And need to get Freya back on Three Hills so she can get some good news soon.

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