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Tall Ship - Part VII

Saturday, December 8, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Jayne's unhappy, and Mal plays in the snow while Freya and Zoe do the job. Not quite 2BF, but a bit longer to make up for it. NEW CHAPTER

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“Here.” Hannah held out a couple of crutches.

“For me?” He smiled. “You shouldn’t’ve. Didn’t know it was my birthday. But they ain‘t wrapped.”

“Be like that and I’ll take them away again.”

“No, please, I love them.” He chuckled. “Just what I always wanted.”

“Well, you’re healing quick, and I think a little light exercise won’t be too bad for you. Just so long as you don’t try leaping around quite yet.”

He shook his head. “Never even considered it.”

“No, course not.”

They laughed together, easy in each other’s company.

“So I'm being given the run of the place?” he asked, moving himself forward so his legs hung off the edge of the bed.

“There’s not much of a place to run, but some fresh air might put some colour in your cheeks.” She leaned forward, doing up the shirt she’d given him to wear. “But you have to keep warm. I've got one of Ben’s old coats out for you – the sleeves might be a bit short, but it’ll do.”

He grinned at her. “And I’m grateful. You know that.”

She blushed and turned away. “Well, a body has to be helpful.” Going to the fire she picked up his boots. “Good job you didn’t lose these in the river,” she said, giving herself a moment by brushing imaginary dust off them. “Ben’s would never’ve fit you. He had small feet. Almost dainty.”

“Don’t think that word’s ever been used to describe me,” he said, knowing exactly what she was doing. “So, you planning on hugging them to death, or do I get to put them on?”

Hannah glared at him. “I’ll have you know it took me ages to get them soft. The leather had soaked up a load of water, and when they dried they were stiff as … well, I thought I might have to throw them out.” She held them out. “I worked hard on these.”

“And they look shiny.” He glanced down at his stocking feet. “’Cept I’m thinking I need help getting them on.”

She smiled. “That I can manage.”

“Ben, come on!” Jonah shouted from the doorway. “We’ve built a snowman, but we need you to help finish him off!”

“I'm coming fa

Comments
Saturday, 08 December 2007 13:55
Excellent chapter! You're setting up all kinds of different angles in this story and so many possible ways it could go - wow. Loved the kids in the snow. Loved how Mal was repelled by Freya's pain, not drawn to it. The man is a survivor after all, but I'm waiting to see with what you come up with as the trigger to pull him back to his responsibilities. Fabulous story - just still want more!
Saturday, 08 December 2007 14:58
Loving this story, but please I need Freya and Mal back together!

And you're setting up something else too on Hammond that could go wrong.

You are evil!
Saturday, 08 December 2007 15:41
Uh oh, who fired that shot? I too loved the snowscene with Mal and kids at play and like Mal didn't like that man that came by, it felt as if he was either threatening Hannah or warning her. Glad that Mal was thinking of how best to protect them should something bad happen. Can't wait for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 08 December 2007 19:29
You have this story spreading out all over and every one of them is interesting.
Sunday, 09 December 2007 01:04
Wonderful work as always. But I think I'm going to be very sad for Hannah before this is all over!

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