Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Tall Ship - Part VI

Friday, December 7, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Jayne is making headway, Kaylee's mourning and Freya's lost. NEW CHAPTER and who knows, maybe a 2BF later?

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Jayne made his way down the hall, stopping outside the door the barkeep had told him about. Inside he could hear someone singing to themselves, in quite a pleasant voice, something he remembered Kaylee had hummed for a few days before this all started.

Deciding to be a gentleman for a change, he knocked. After a moment the door opened, and a young woman peered out, apparently caught in the middle of painting her face ready for the evening.

“Yes?” she asked.

“You Lily?”

She smiled at him, looking him up and down. “Well, I ain’t actually open for business yet, but I guess maybe for you I could make an exception.”

He leaned on the doorjamb, and let his widest grin out. “So I can come in?”

She stood back. “Surely can.”

Jayne sauntered over the threshold, then waited until she closed the door. “Thanks.”

“So … what do you fancy? My rates depend on what you’re into and –“

“Talking.”

She looked confused. “What?”

“I just want to talk.”

She put her hands on her hips and stuck her breasts forward. “Why?”

“’Cause I need your help.”

“Why didn’t you say?” She sidled towards him, so close he could smell the cheap perfume she’d put behind her ears. “I can help you a lot.”

He pushed her away. “Not with that. Ain't never needed help with that. No, this ain't sex, Lily. I need your help with something else.”

She shrugged. “If I'm getting paid, I guess I’ll try.”

He pulled a couple of notes from his pocket and handed them over, watching idly as she stuffed them down her cleavage. “Few days back, before you took off, you were helped by a guy in the bar. Tall, blue eyes. Wore a –“

“Brown coat, yeah, I remember.” She half-smiled. “He wasn't interested in me either.”

“He wouldn’t have been.”

“Said he was married.” She wrinkled her nose slightly then put her head on one side. “He in trouble?”

“He’s dead.”

She stood straighter. “Oh, I'm sorry to hear that. He stopped me getting a black eye or busted lip. Or worse.”

“He was my friend.”

“He see

Comments
Friday, 07 December 2007 13:58
Wow, what a heartbreaker this was. Beautifully written, and painfully accurate description of grief. Glad to see it was Ethan that could get through to Freya. And the Kaylee part was perfect and so in character with how loving she is. Happy fluff soon?
Friday, 07 December 2007 14:01
Excellent chapter. And I wouldn't be averse to another one today, please! :-)
Friday, 07 December 2007 16:55
That was emotional. Maybe the little nudge will bring Mal back around before the crew cracks.
Friday, 07 December 2007 20:41
Oh Wow, this was beautifully written especially the last part with Freya after Ethan goes to her and her thoughts and longing for Mal touch every one of them and reach him in his sleep. As for Lily, she is up to her neck in this whole business. I kind of suspected that her and the man supposedly after her might be in this together, setting up marks and then rolling them for their coin and any other valuables they might have. I also think the Sheriff might me in on it or running things. Lily saying she needed ten minutes to get ready before taking him to Dyle was so gorram fishy I am surprised Jayne wasn't suspicious. It gave her ample time to ring someone, perhaps the Sheriff, so that Dyle could be killed to make it look like a suicide and cover their tracks. I really hope Jayne catches a clue bus soon. And poor Frey. I also really liked seeing how the loss of the Captain is affecting Kaylee, was all manner of touched that she kept the broken catalyster and really loved how Bethie knew that all Mal's yelling and shouting wasn't through anger but worry. Such a lot crammed into this little chapter and you make it look so easy. That is very classy. Can't wait for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 08 December 2007 02:09
Great job, all around. I can't resist a mystery either!

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