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Tall Ship - Part III

Tuesday, December 4, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. So maybe he isn't as dead as he thought he was, but the crew don't know that.

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“I’m sorry to hear that,” Barrick said, nervously looking around off screen. They’d suggested he come to the ship but he refused, and found his normal reluctance to talk over a wave working against him this time. “But the deal was made, and half the money paid. If that’s gone -”

“No, we have the money,” Zoe said firmly. “I just need the details.”

“Look, I don’t like to discuss business over an open link –”

“Then send the co-ordinates.”

Barrick paused, then nodded. “Fine. I’ll get someone to do that straight away.” He leaned forward slightly. “He’s not the first, you know.”

“What?” Zoe stiffened.

“Mal. There’s been at least five that I know of. People getting killed in the dark, all their valuables taken off them.”

“But the sheriff didn’t mention -”

“The law around here ain’t worth much,” Barrick said, then glanced guiltily over his shoulder as if someone might have been eavesdropping. “Folks don’t generally go to him. They take care of matters themselves.”

“I’ll bear that in mind.”

Barrick nodded, all business again. “You sure you’re gonna be able to get the job done?”

“We’ll get it done.”

“Good. And … well, good.” He switched off at his end.

There was a slight beep and Hank leaned forward. “Info’s here,” he said softly.

“Yes,” she responded, but she wasn’t really listening.

“What is it?” he asked. “What’s going on in that brain of yours?”

In the galley the others were talking, sitting around the table, notable for its lack of Freya.

“She ain’t gone into their bunk,” Kaylee said, her eyes still red from crying.

“I know,” Simon said, Bethany asleep in his lap. “I had to threaten her with a sedative even to lie down, but she’s in one of the passenger rooms.”

“Ethan and Jesse are with her,” River put in, her hair hanging down around her face as if she was trying to hide. “They’re asleep.”

“That’s good.”

“They’re exhausted.”

“I’ll keep an eye on them,” Simon promised.

Jayne moved a little in his seat. “We’re gonna get paid for t

Comments
Tuesday, 04 December 2007 13:49
Exciting and challenging is how I'd describe this story arc. How are three psychics going to find Mal if they don't think he's alive and he doesn't know how to tell them. How is Jayne going to find him and be a BDH? How is Mal not going to fall for Hannah and get his mind back? How does Sam work into these plotlines? How do you find the original shooter and fix the sheriff? Yup, I think you'll be a litle busy for awhile, Jane. Thanks for a great story!
Tuesday, 04 December 2007 14:43
I'm enjoying this story. Got a feeling more actions on the way now that Jaynes on the hunt.
Tuesday, 04 December 2007 21:10
Very intriguing plotlines so far. And I see you have a Hannah of your own to intersect with Mal's life. lol
Tuesday, 04 December 2007 23:00
I love the decision to have Jayne stay behind and try to find out who the *tamade hundan* is who shot Mal. I'm hoping his skills will lead him to Hannah. I'm also guessing that none of the psychics aboard Serenity are aware Mal is still alive because he has lost his memory and therefore can't be casting thoughts about them/to them? Whatever, loving this story to bits. All manner of impatient for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 05 December 2007 04:31
Figure it'll take you a while to answer all our questions. I will be enjoing the story while you do.

BTW Mal has to rescued. Freya and Mal belong together.

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