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Tall Ship - Part II

Monday, December 3, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Serenity's crew believes Mal is dead, and they begin to deal. NEW CHAPTER

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3500    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Simon had brought Freya round from her faint, waving a broken capsule under her nose, but it was as if she’d left part of herself behind in the darkness of unconsciousness. There was something missing from her as she walked out of the sheriff’s office, carrying Mal’s browncoat, the others following as they headed back to the Firefly.

“What do we do now?” Simon whispered to Zoe.

“I … I don’t know,” the dark woman admitted. “It’s not like we can have a funeral, but … I don’t know.”

“I can’t believe Mal’s dead.”

Zoe looked at him. “There were times when we neither of us thought to be coming home, to Serenity or anywhere else,” she said softly. “When we thought it was gonna be our last sight of the sun, or the moon, or the shell-filled darkness of a battlefield. But we always came for each other. Were there, to save each other.” She shook her head. “Only this time I wasn’t.”

“Do you think there’s any chance he might have survived?”

For a long moment she allowed herself the possibility of hope, then she saw again in her mind’s eye the river, the huge lumps of debris crashing into the rocks. “Don’t see how, Simon. Not with the way that water was running. But without a body …”

“Then maybe -”

“No. No, there ain’t.” She glanced towards the woman walking in front of them. “Most I think we can look forward to is news of his body being found, and if that river goes into the sea, that ain’t likely either.”

“It’s my fault,” Jayne said, his arm wrapped around River’s shoulders as she stumbled along, lost inside his coat that he’d insisted she put on. “Told me to get the cash back to the boat.”

“Why’d he do that?” Hank asked.

“In case Barrick tried to get a refund, I guess.”

“You think it was him?”

“Nah. He ain’t one to do that. Too afraid of his own shadow.”

“But if someone thought Mal had cash on him …”

“We don’t know it was because of that,” Zoe put in quickly.

“Yeah, but if I’d been with him -”

“No-one’s blaming you.”

“Hell, Zoe, I am! If’n I’d stayed, w

Comments
Monday, 03 December 2007 17:43
Poor, poor Ethan. Somehow even worse than Freya, though Freya was bad enough. And Zoe. And Kaylee. And River. Geez, just everybody!
Monday, 03 December 2007 18:57
Freya taking charge and doing the job even though she's tore up. Very well done.
Monday, 03 December 2007 23:53
HA! I knew you wouldn't kill Mal, lol. Great by play between everyone though. Everything seems just right, especially Zoe assuming the responsibility for notifying Inara. And Frey stepping up to make sure they can keep flying. Great work, but I've come to expect that from you :)
Tuesday, 04 December 2007 00:00
Angst, sorrow and a little hope at the end. Well done as always!
Tuesday, 04 December 2007 00:27
Oh Wow, I was that close to my gorram heart stopping, the only thing keeping a little hope still going the fact that they hadn't found a body. Glad to see at the end that our doughty Captain isn't dead and that kindly folk are looking to do their best for him. Boy though, you are so good at piling on the angst. Poor Freya, poor Ethan - gorramit, poor everybody! And Jayne feeling all manner of guilty for not waiting and walking back with Mal. Ali D
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Tuesday, 04 December 2007 04:09
You've managed a new level of angsty here, even for you. Wow. Loved the way you worked Sam into this and in a way that's just perfect for him. Looking forward to more! Why do I get the feeling that the head injury was on purpose?

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