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Tall Ship - Part I

Sunday, December 2, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. The start of a new story arc. Mal goes to a meet to pick up the details of a new job, but there's trouble. NEW STORY

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Mal left the bar, smiling. It had been a good meet, and he’d got the next job lined up. Paying well, too, with half up front. Keep everyone flying for a while longer. He didn’t want to rely on Inara’s charity, even though he knew she was more than willing to give them a home whenever they needed it. Trouble was, in the past few weeks jobs seemed hard to come by, and what there was tended to be things he’d like to avoid, even if he would have taken them in the past. But now, with kids on board … anyway, at least there was something to look forward to.

And the fact that he’d been propositioned hadn’t done his ego any harm at all.

He wouldn’t normally have gone to the meet on his own, although Barrick had insisted. Still, he cheated a little and had Jayne get to the bar half an hour beforehand. He looked like a fixture by the time Mal arrived and headed into the small back room.

“It’s a pick up on Beylix, delivering to a private address on Hammond,” Barrick said, nervously running his fingers around his collar.

Mal would normally have taken this as a sign that something was about to go wrong, but Barrick was notorious. “You know, you should seriously consider finding yourself a new line of business,” Mal said conversationally. “I wouldn’t be surprised if you ain't heading to give yourself an ulcer.”

Barrick grimaced, pressing one hand to his stomach. “Too late,” he said.

“Then why don’t you get out of the work?”

“Someone has to broker these deals.” Barrick swallowed hastily. “And I make a good living.”

“It ain't worth it if you ain't got your health.”

“I’m fine.” He pulled a box from his pocket and fished a flat white tablet out. Popping it into his mouth he washed it down with the whisky in front of him.

“Then you need to see a doctor,” Mal advised.

“I do. Often.” Barrick sat up a little. “So you can do this? Only there’s a deadline. Beylix in four days, Hammond before the month’s out.”

Mal nodded. “We can do it.”

Barrick visibly relaxed. He put a small l

Comments
Sunday, 02 December 2007 18:29
Once again you know how to turn on the angst. Ouch. But you're gonna make it better soon, right?
Sunday, 02 December 2007 19:44
And people complain that I like cliffhangers too much!!! ROFL What a great start to your new arc! well written and well played out! Can't wait to see where this is headed.
Sunday, 02 December 2007 23:08
Poor Mal, guy never gets an even break and poor poor Frey and the kids. I wonder whether that girl and the man who was supposedly going to hit her had set Mal up in the bar. Why Jayne went on ahead and left Mal to finish that itty bitty drink alone baffles me given how careful they normally are. Just hope you don't go and kill of my Captain, not sure I'd ever forgive you if you do that. Now I'll be worrying and wringing my gorram hands until the next part. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 03 December 2007 05:41
Well now, that was altogether a wild way to start this ride. Must have more immediately! ANd I have absolute faith you won't kill our Captain, ummm, right?! *nibbles on nails a little*
Monday, 03 December 2007 16:36
I'm liking this start. Action right out of the gate. Hope Mal makes it. Maybe a little barfly was able to fish him out of the water.

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