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Good Myth - Part III

Friday, November 30, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. River finishes telling her story to Simon, and discovers something interesting. Part III of III. CONCLUDING AND NEW CHAPTER

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“So Freya’s attracted to Mal?”

River nodded. “Very much.”

Simon looked thoughtful. “And Jayne’s offering … does this end with her having a conversation with him through the airlock?”

“No.”

“Pity.” He winced as she poked him with her pen. Rubbing at the spot on his arm, he said, “Come on. You can’t stop there. Not now.”

Freya waited until she heard the hatch slam closed, then her shoulders sagged. Gorram nosy, opinionated crew. Maybe she needed to be more forceful, perhaps threaten them with the old airlock just a bit –

“You okay?”

“What is this, Osiris Central Port?” she asked, throwing her hands into the air and turning around.

Mal Reynolds gazed at her. “Sorry. You just looked … sad.”

“Not sad. Just … bemused. This room‘s getting more traffic tonight than it does during the day!”

“I just came for a drink.”

She took a deep breath. “No, I’m sorry. And there’s some tea brewed if you’d like some.”

“Shiny.” He walked behind the counter, but didn’t take his eyes off her. “Maddy is … she likes men.”

Freya froze. “Really.”

“I heard. I wasn’t eavesdropping, not really, just happened to … Truth is, she’s never been faithful to me, not in all the years we’ve been wed. It’s not been serious, and I don’t think she’d ever leave me, but she … your man isn’t the first, and likely not to be the last.”

She looked at him, at the melancholy air he was projecting. “Then why do you stay with her?”

He shrugged. “She’s my wife.”

“Do you love her?”

“I did. Once. But Shadow ain’t really into divorce. And she’s a good wife in all other aspects.”

“So do you … stray?”

“Not a single time. Never wanted to. Not ‘til now.”

“Mr Reynolds –”

“Please. Call me Mal. I’d like to hear you say it. Even if it‘s just the once.”

There was a pause. Then … “Mal.”

He smiled, his face lighting up. “See? Was that so bad?”

“This isn’t right.”

“Never said it was.”

Their eyes locked, then she turned away. “No. Not happening,” she said, almost

Comments
Friday, 30 November 2007 17:01
Well, maybe not. But three pages?”

“Mal and Freya …” she said,
That made me laugh. Good story
Saturday, 01 December 2007 03:32
What a great little story! I know I haven't been commenting on all your posts like I often do, but I've read all of them, rest assured. Like the way Like Woman ended, even though I still don't like Sammy Boy, lol. I'm sure I'll come around though, lol.
Great work, but then I always expect that from you. Keep at it!
Saturday, 01 December 2007 05:31
River smiled. “Happy ever after is right here,”

I guess that about sums things up.
Saturday, 01 December 2007 13:34
This was a strange little diversion through hormone surges, lust and the art of storytelling, but I liked the little glimpse you gave into the creative side of storytelling and the power of the story. It made me remember the words and intentions of Joseph Campbell to explain the power of the myth.

But my favorite part was River realizing at the end that the best world was the one she already had.

Wonderfully written, as always!
Monday, 03 December 2007 04:19
Was out of town, so I didn't see this until today! Lovely, as always! Glad River's story was just a story, and glad she didn't quite finish it! I, too, believe in the power of words! :D

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