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Playing Parts - Part XVIII

Saturday, November 17, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal and Saffron try to swim to freedom, and Freya is beside herself with worry. NEW CHAPTER

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Act VII cont - Borodin

The applause sounded long and loud, ringing through the ballroom as the actors took their bows, until Theo walked to the centre front and raised his hands.

“Friends, friends … I think I can call you that after we have spent this congenial time in each other’s company. I am gratified to hear you enjoyed our play, and hope this won’t be the last time we meet. But until then, let me wish you all a fond farewell and a safe journey home. Goodnight.” He bowed deeply and swept off the stage, followed by the rest of the actors, as the clapping broke out again.

Theo beamed at his troupe. “That was well done, everyone. Thank you.”

“Yeah, well done,” Zoe said, stepping up close behind him. “But we’ve still got two missing people here, and no way of finding them.”

“They’re leaving,” Kaylee said, peering through the scenery.

“About gorram time.” Jayne stood up. “Bose going?”

“Everyone is.”

Zoe turned to him. “Jayne, let us know when the guards have gone.”

“On it.” The big man loped off.

-

Mal stared up into the small room at the end of the corridor. “Seems we’ve found it.”

Water was pouring through a pipe above their heads, wide enough to take a body.

“I can’t climb up there!” Saffron insisted, her shivering becoming almost uncontrollable.

“Don’t have to. We’ll wait for the room to fill then swim out.”

“What if we can’t get through? If it turns too tightly, or gets narrow or –“

“Darlin’, we’re in line to drown one way or the other. If it’s gonna happen then I’d kinda like to go down fighting. Or swimming, in this case.”

“What about that rescue you talked about?”

Mal paused a moment. “Honestly?”

“Why not? It would make a change.”

“Then honestly, I don’t think they’re gonna get here in time. So we make our own way out.”

Saffron stared at him. “You’re insane.”

“It’s been said.”

“In which case …” She thought for a moment, then tugged on his arm. “Come on.”

“Where? Saffron, I don’t see another way out of th

Comments
Saturday, 17 November 2007 13:28
Excellent chapter! Made my lungs ache! :D
Saturday, 17 November 2007 14:09
Now that is what I call thrilling heroics! I won't want to go swimming again for a long time after this. Great description of hypothermia too. Now we get to hear Saffron's side of the plot and hopefully what was in the safe. Somebody's going to be a little ticked off pretty soon!
Saturday, 17 November 2007 15:07
Wow, I was on the edge of my seat reading this chapter! So happy for Saffron to be making an appearance again in your series, and I'm so curious as to how much about her Freya knows. I do hope Mal never finds out, though...

BTW, exhaled air does have enough oxygen to be rebreathed for a certain amount of time, so the plastic bags are a clever plot device. Of course, standard air has a higher percentage of 02, so if you want to cut our heroes a break, maybe they whipped and filled the bags with air before heading out?
Sunday, 18 November 2007 02:36
Excellent chapter. I was on the edge of my gorram seat. I think most people have an inate fear of drowning and it had a feeling of claustrophia as well. So happy Frey could get through to Mal and he was able to respond in her mind enough for her to know he was going to be alright. Can't wait for the confrontation with Theo. Ali D :~)
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