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Playing Parts - Part XVII

Friday, November 16, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Trapped in the basement, Mal and Saffron try to find a way out, while the play continues above them. NEW CHAPTER

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Act VII cont – Borodin

“Spying.” Zoe glared. “Care to enlighten us?”

Theo shook his head. “She’s mistaken.”

“No, she ain’t,” Jayne rumbled.

Etta touched her husband’s arm. “Tell them.”

He looked at her. “Etta –“

“Just tell them.” She looked like she was about to cry.

-

“There must be something you can do,” Saffron said, pushing her arm into one sleeve of Mal’s shirt and tying the other around her. “You’re the man here.”

“Glad you’ve noticed.” Mal sat down on the step and watched her. “But I figure it’s just a waiting game until my people come for us.”

“What if they don’t know something’s wrong?”

“They know,” Mal said confidently. Frey, you’d better know , he thought, somewhat less so.

-

“Mikel is … was something of a thief,” Theo began. “I found him one night trying to break into the safe on Cressida. He’d got as far as opening the door.”

“I take it you didn’t turn him in.” Zoe crossed her arms.

“No. After speaking to him, I … well, I found out what his life had been like. Offered him a second chance. He took it, and he’s been with us ever since.”

“That doesn’t explain what he’s doing, nor why he's been caught,” Simon put in.

“What’s he pinching?” Jayne picked up one of the knives from the table, and checked its edge.

“Information,” Etta said.

-

“Well, if rescue doesn’t arrive soon I'm going to die from pneumonia.”

“Any chance of that happening sooner rather than later?” Mal was trying to think.

“No-one’s coming.” She spoke as if to a child.

“Then we’re gonna have to get ourselves out of here.” He was concerned that he hadn’t been able to contact Freya, but then, they’d not actually tried it that way before. It had always been her dropping thoughts into his mind, not the other way around. After all, she was the psychic, not him.

“And how do you propose we do that? The door’s locked.” Saffron pointed to it.

He stood up. “Come on. There’s bits of this place we ain’t seen yet.”

“B

Comments
Friday, 16 November 2007 11:07
I really like Mal not taking any of Saffron's *fei hua*. As for Theo I could cheerfully set Jayne on tearing the *tamade hundan* limb from limb. Even knowing all the danger he has plunged Serenity's Captain and crew into he is still lying, still clinging to his own agenda as if it is the only thing that matters. I rather side with Cade Foster in "First Wave" when he said, "I don't want to live in a world where one life doesn't matter." Best line? Mal hoping to find a gag for Saffron. LOL! Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 16 November 2007 12:26
Ah, more Mal/Saffron banter for a Friday morning! Can't beat that! :D
Friday, 16 November 2007 12:40
Saffron is about as annoying as a person can get. Hope they find their way out of the basement sooner rather than later. So much like Mal to decide to go through the obstacle rather than away from it.
Friday, 16 November 2007 18:51
I am so loving this - you're great at characterizations, dialogue, AND intriguing plots! (One question though, b/c I'm trying to visualize everything - how long is the chain btwn Mal and Saffron?)

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