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Dire Straits - Part 3 of 3

Monday, August 9, 2004

The crew have been betrayed, they are in the hands of the Alliance, the Captain is still very sick and there doesnt seem to be any hope left.

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DIRE STRAITS – PART THREE

Simon’s knees began to ache from kneeling on the uneven ground and as he shifted to get comfortable he glanced around at the others. They mostly wore looks of fear and surprise, only River seemed exempt. She was staring at their captor Samuelson with an almost rapt expression of wonder. Something about the man had obviously intrigued her.

As Samuelson finished talking with his officer, Inara approached from the main house, shadowed on either side by a bodyguard. Her face was pale and drawn, but she didn’t seem surprised to find the crew kneeling on the ground in front of the ship. She advanced on Samuelson and he looked her up and down in a suggestive manner as she drew near.

“What is going to happen to the crew and myself?” she asked, not wasting any time. Samuelson gave Inara an amused smile at being challenged so boldly but decided to play along.

“You’re all going to be placed under arrest, charged and probably executed for your crimes against the Alliance,” he replied calmly. “The system might be lenient on a woman of your standing, but I expect the rest will get the needle.”

“What are we to be charged with?” Inara persisted.

Something changed in Samuelson’s posture and the men around him noticed, taking an involuntary step backwards. Simon suddenly realised how tall the man was as he towered over Inara and she had to crane her neck to look at his face. Despite the tide of anger boiling behind his eyes, Inara did not back down and courageously stood her ground. Samuelson grunted and looked mildly surprised.

He began to tick off the charges on his fingers. “Murder of Alliance personnel, theft of Alliance equipment and medical supplies, harbouring known fugitives, arson, smuggling, and war crimes against the Alliance. Will that suffice?” he asked rhetorically. “I won’t ask you to kneel beside the others, I expect you’re worn out from doing too much of that in your day job,” he snapped. The final veneer of his false charm fell away, revealing a harsh and merciless man wh

Comments
Monday, 09 August 2004 23:38
A good story but it felt like there was a whole ton of explanations missing. I liked how your wrapped it up after waiting so long for this part but would have loved a longer story with more story in it, if you follow my drift. Very shiny, thank you. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 10 August 2004 01:05
Wait, what price did Inara pay? I'm dying to know. Do you even know? Is this going to be another "Marcellus Wallace's briefcase"?
Tuesday, 10 August 2004 03:56
Happy to see the resolution to this story! Some good action you'd worked out. I agree that the story could have been much, much longer--felt rather condensed. Enjoyed the writing and the action and wanted to be able to spend more time wallowing in it.
HEB
Monday, 16 August 2004 14:27
Wow. I really enjoyed this. You've really captured the characters' voices.


Sequel please?
heb

ps. I liked the shrimp reference.
TARLAH
Thursday, 19 August 2004 16:56
Very nice. Thank for the story.

Please tell me there's a part 4. What happened to Inara?

::huggles::
...tarlah...
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 14 June 2005 15:59
Maybe I'm just a sick individual but I'd really like to know what Inara had to do to save Mal. Perhaps you don't even know (which I would understand) and maybe we're just supposed to imagine the worse possible degradation???? to us. Good story - thanks for not letting it drag on forever. I didn't read it til I saw the 3 of 3 - could have been longer as long as there was an end. Patti
Sunday, 22 October 2006 20:34
Yep that's pretty effective to not go into details about what Inara had to do. I like it and as someone else said here on the board; you just can't help to think of the worst possible thing.

Maybe a sequel?

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