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Always Lookin'

Thursday, June 21, 2007

Jayne’s an observant man, but Kaylee hasn’t noticed... or has she?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2879    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Title: Always Lookin'

Author: hisgoodgirl

Disclaimer: All belongs to Joss.

Characters: Jayne and Kaylee (sorta), Kaylee and Simon (sorta).

Warning: PG-15; mild profanity, vague sexual reference.

Setting: During the series.

Word Count: 739

A/N: I recently watched Firefly on a huge projection screen for the first time during a Firefly Marathon hosted by the Charlotte Browncoats. Maybe it was the large format, but I really noticed how often Jayne is surreptitiously watching Kaylee. Written by reader request as the companion piece to “She Don’t Know”. (Click on my name above for a listing of my fics and lots more Jaylee.) Previously posted in the jaylee_ship and ff_fanfic comms at LJ.

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Always Lookin’

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Jayne Cobb’s the confoundingest man I ever met. He’s always lookin’ at me. Thinks I don’t notice it, but I do.

It ain't like the man’s what you’d call ‘subtle’ about most things. He’s always comin’ up with some excuse to come borrow a wrench or a screwdriver when I’m workin’ on the engine or standin’ over me durin’ mess cleanup. I know damn well the laws of chance wouldn’t be pairin’ up the two of us as often as the schedule shows.

If I asked him, he’d lie and flat out deny it.

From the very day the Cap’n hired him, he’s been checkin’ me out. Runnin’ them steely eyes a his over my backside and oglin’ my bosom. I don’t have to see him a’lookin’ – I can feel it.

He’ll be down in the bay, workin’ out, an’ maybe I gotta take the catwalk up to the bridge or over to ‘Nara’s shuttle. He keeps on liftin’ them weights, but I know he’s watchin’ me. (The truth is, I been known to do the same. ‘Specially, if you stand on the rail opposite his weight bench, you get a real nice view of all them muscles and sometimes a little more.)

Cap’n keeps warnin’ him off me an’ tellin’ me to watch my step around the man. Says Jayne’s dangerous, not to be tru

Comments
Thursday, 21 June 2007 13:23
I really like these. I really do.
Thursday, 21 June 2007 15:15
Oh, Kaylee... so many men, so much societal pressure toward monogamy! Take them both! (okay, I really would only advocate this plan in a fictional setting, but still...)

I like how you do Kaylee's voice. I can really hear her in this monologue. I like how she thinks Jayne wouldn't be interested in her, but she KNOWS he's watching. What does she think he wants?

May I ask for more? Slow and steady build, so it can go on and on and on...

:)
Thursday, 21 June 2007 19:34
Loved Jayne's, and love Kaylee's, too. You write them so incredibly well.

*sigh* I'm jealous. ;o)
Tuesday, 26 June 2007 01:29
Well now...even if it was unintentional, this is a wonderful case of "ask and ye shall receive," I must say!

;D

Oh these poor deluded fools! They both want to get to know each other better, but they think the other not interested! All kinds of "Gah!" IMO;)

Fabulous work here in any case, HGG! Definitely think you nailed Monologuing!Kaylee poifectly and I can't wait to see if you expand on this more;D

BEB

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