Title: Always Lookin'
Author: hisgoodgirl
Disclaimer: All belongs to Joss.
Characters: Jayne and Kaylee (sorta), Kaylee and Simon (sorta).
Warning: PG-15; mild profanity, vague sexual reference.
Setting: During the series.
Word Count: 739
A/N: I recently watched Firefly on a huge projection screen for the first time during a Firefly Marathon hosted by the Charlotte Browncoats. Maybe it was the large format, but I really noticed how often Jayne is surreptitiously watching Kaylee. Written by reader request as the companion piece to “She Don’t Know”. (Click on my name above for a listing of my fics and lots more Jaylee.) Previously posted in the jaylee_ship and ff_fanfic comms at LJ.
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Always Lookin’
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Jayne Cobb’s the confoundingest man I ever met. He’s always lookin’ at me. Thinks I don’t notice it, but I do.
It ain't like the man’s what you’d call ‘subtle’ about most things. He’s always comin’ up with some excuse to come borrow a wrench or a screwdriver when I’m workin’ on the engine or standin’ over me durin’ mess cleanup. I know damn well the laws of chance wouldn’t be pairin’ up the two of us as often as the schedule shows.
If I asked him, he’d lie and flat out deny it.
From the very day the Cap’n hired him, he’s been checkin’ me out. Runnin’ them steely eyes a his over my backside and oglin’ my bosom. I don’t have to see him a’lookin’ – I can feel it.
He’ll be down in the bay, workin’ out, an’ maybe I gotta take the catwalk up to the bridge or over to ‘Nara’s shuttle. He keeps on liftin’ them weights, but I know he’s watchin’ me. (The truth is, I been known to do the same. ‘Specially, if you stand on the rail opposite his weight bench, you get a real nice view of all them muscles and sometimes a little more.)
Cap’n keeps warnin’ him off me an’ tellin’ me to watch my step around the man. Says Jayne’s dangerous, not to be tru
I like how you do Kaylee's voice. I can really hear her in this monologue. I like how she thinks Jayne wouldn't be interested in her, but she KNOWS he's watching. What does she think he wants?
May I ask for more? Slow and steady build, so it can go on and on and on...
:)
*sigh* I'm jealous. ;o)
;D
Oh these poor deluded fools! They both want to get to know each other better, but they think the other not interested! All kinds of "Gah!" IMO;)
Fabulous work here in any case, HGG! Definitely think you nailed Monologuing!Kaylee poifectly and I can't wait to see if you expand on this more;D
BEB
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