Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Bequest - Part VIII

Wednesday, June 20, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal and Freya figure out more of the clues, and the treasure hunt is set in motion. I love your comments - keep 'em coming!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3384    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Hank ran his hands through his hair and yawned hugely then leaned over the screen on the bridge. “Why do you think there’s something to find?” he asked, scratching his chest.

“Call it a hunch.”

Mal had woken Hank up, and once persuaded the ship wasn't on fire and Zoe wasn't giving birth, the pilot had made his way to the bridge.

“You get many of those at …” Hank glanced at the shipboard chronometer. “God, at this time of the night?”

“It’s morning, Hank.”

“Not from where my body sits.”

“Well, it’ll sit outside in the rain if you don’t take a look.”

Hank looked up at the bridge windows, and the stair rods hammering down. “Rain? Looks more like we should be building an ark.”

“Hank –“

“Does Casmir like the going good or soft?” he asked idly, interrupting his captain without thinking. Then he saw the look on Mal’s face and the thought occurred to him that might not have been too good an idea.

“What?”

“The going. The ground. When he runs.”

“How the hell should I know?” Mal was rapidly coming to the end of his short temper.

“It should be in the papers. Or the form.” Hank grinned. “Might be worth a flutter if he likes it soft.”

In spite of himself Mal had to ask. “You know about horse racing? I thought cards was your game. And you said you and horses didn’t get on.”

“Only riding them. I've been known to put a little money on a filly or two.”

“You want me to tell Zoe that?”

“I meant betting.”

“Not the way I put it when I tell Zoe if you don’t get your brain in gear and check out the tab!”

Hank looked at him. “This isn’t doing your blood pressure any good.”

“Do I have to get my gun and threaten you?”

Hank grinned. “See? All you had to do was ask nicely.”

“Can you not shoot him?” Freya said, climbing up the steps behind them. “I think Zoe’s only just got him house-trained. And it‘ll be messy.” She held out a cup of coffee. “Here.”

Hank took it gratefully. “I love you,” he said sincerely.

“Hey, what about me?” Mal complained.

“I

Comments
SUVIE
Wednesday, 20 June 2007 15:28
Too ruttin' funny "Anyone else want to change? Got a deep and abiding urge to annoy me further?"

Truly have enjoyed all of your writing!
Wednesday, 20 June 2007 15:29
I love Mal and Freya trying to puzzle out the mystery like gorram detectives but I really hate the timing of River having to go and register for the race. Call me suspicious but coincidences seldom are just that and the thought of Kaylee going with River makes me jumpy. Kaylee is too easily distracted and too trusting to be much of a one for spotting trouble before it hits and I am not sure she isn't being set up. Can't wait for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 20 June 2007 19:04
This tale is just a pleasure to read! Love the banter of the crew in this one!
Thursday, 21 June 2007 02:29
I love how you're developing the mystery here. I can't tell if the mystery is the horse race, the mine or the video. Love to have to guess as to where you're going to go with this. Great job as always, and always a delight to read your writing
Sunday, 24 June 2007 19:42
Hmm...I took the stable hand's arrival as an attempt to see River, rather than the opening part to an attempted trap. Could be an unintentional merging of agendas, I suppose;)

And I definitely agree with Suvie in that Mal's line of "Anyone else want to change? Got a deep and abiding urge to annoy me further?" was just spot-on hilarious for Mal;D

BEB

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