Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Bequest - Part VII

Tuesday, June 19, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal and some of the crew visit the horse he has inherited, and some light begins to dawn ... I love to keep you guessing!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3424    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Casmir.” The steward at the stables swung his hand around like a magician performing a particularly difficult trick. And if he’d managed to pull a stallion out of thin air, he’d probably have got a standing ovation. As it was, the stable boy just led the horse out of his stall into the centre of the yard.

“Wow.” Kaylee’s mouth hung open a little.

“I have to agree,” Simon said. “Wow.”

Casmir was a handsome horse, dark brown, almost black in colour, with a gloss to his coat that spoke of hours of grooming. His eyes were clear, and his ears pricked forward as he watched these newcomers.

“His sire was a winner, and his dam too, but Casmir hasn’t shown any sign of inheriting their genius,” the steward said, shaking his head. “Mr Reilly considered this his last chance.”

“I think he’s beautiful,” Kaylee said stoutly.

Bethany’s eyes were wide. “Can I stroke him?” she asked.

“No, sweetheart, I don’t think that’s a good idea,” Simon said. “We don’t know what he’s like.”

“He’s a good boy,” the stable lad said. “She ain’t gonna get hurt.”

Bethany stared up at her father, imploring him.

“Well, I suppose … but –”

Whatever else he was about to say was lost as she pulled her hand free and ran over to the horse, standing under his head.

“Hello,” she said. “I’m Bethany.”

The horse looked down, lowering his head so he could look at her more clearly, then he nudged her gently. She giggled.

River put her hand on the horse’s forehead, and smiled. Without a word she lifted Bethany up to sit on his back.

“River …” Simon protested, Kaylee grabbing at his hand.

“He doesn’t mind,” his sister said.

Bethany laughed even more. “I’m riding!” she said.

“Do you want me to …” The stable boy indicated with his head.

“Please,” River said, smiling sweetly at him.

The boy led Casmir in a wide circle around the yard, keeping his eye on River all the time as she held onto Bethany, ready in case the little girl slipped.

Jayne glared at him but he didn’t even notice, while Kayle

Comments
Tuesday, 19 June 2007 15:40
Ooh, this is so intriguing ... "There's twist and cul-de-sacs - it's wild!"

I have no idea where you're going with this, but I am along for the ride. And Bethie's interaction with Casmir was priceless as was River's determination to ride. I love it!
Tuesday, 19 June 2007 19:14
Okay, Jane0904, this awful block of text is the same type of posting jetflair has just put up on the last "Stowaway" fanfic so I am guessing there is something up with the formatting on the site or somesuch. I won't be reading this until it's fixed as it is making my eyes water. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 19 June 2007 20:21
I read it despite the formatting problems on the page today, but it was so intriguing! Still not a clue about where you going, but I'm enjoying it immensely!
Wednesday, 20 June 2007 11:34
Hey, formatting is fixed thank goodness! I just LOVED this to bits, especially the part with the horse and River then Mal and Freya joining forces to turn detective! Oh this is so good and a mystery to boot, can't wait for the next part. You are brilliant. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 24 June 2007 05:43
Yep...Mal is definitely a sucker for a properly executed pout from one of his female crew (excluding Zoe...cuz Zoe pouting? Too weird for words;D), and I was all kinds of warm-and-fuzzied by the scene with Bethie bonding with Casimir and River having a nice long chat with the animal;D

BEB

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