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THE HELLBOUND SERIES: 24. "Only the Depth That Varies"

Tuesday, June 19, 2007

"Serenity lands on Barclay. Mal and Jayne go to meet their buyer."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3895    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "ONLY THE DEPTH THAT VARIES"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Canon pairings

RATING: G.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "NEVER TRUST AN HONEST MAN"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://unilelu.net/Alison/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Serenity lands on Barclay. Mal and Jayne go to

meet their buyer."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"ONLY THE DEPTH THAT VARIES"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Barclay was a nondescript little planet, not quite on the Rim but far enough away from the Core that the folks who went there on purpose were either brain damaged or desperate. Sometimes it was a combination of both. Wash had told Mal that it wasn't that bad. They didn't have geese but the beer was drinkable and the whores weren't fussy. Not that the Captain was looking for a whore. As the cargo bay door opened to a world of dust, grime and spiteful winds the Captain saw that they were expected. A big blocky man in his mid thirties stepped forward, the men behind him trying to act casual and bored and pulling off neither. Mal knew without checking that Jayne was on high alert. If any of those men so much as twitched wrong they would be dead. As far as Mal was concerned it was a good thing to know.

"Where's the plant?"

Jayne frowned. "Plant? We ain't horti-ruttin-culturists."

The big blocky man tensed. Mal spoke before it could all go to *diyu*. "An' who might you be?"

The man's look was a touch below a glare. "Brody."

"Captain Malcolm Reynolds."

Brody nodded. When no further conversation was forthcoming the Captain tried to prompt him.

"This is the part where you hand over the rest of the payment an' take these gorram huge agricultural things off our hands,

Comments
Tuesday, 19 June 2007 04:23
"Above her on the catwalk Shepherd Book stepped into view, his rifle resting in his hands a mite easier than his bible ever did." That sentence alone is worth a rating of 10. Good job!
Tuesday, 19 June 2007 08:14
It's pointless, I suppose, to ask that Brak meets a very sticky end. Because he will ... won't he?

And Casey is certifiable. You sure she isn't Saffron's sister?
Wednesday, 20 June 2007 15:28
> "You have no idea what you're messin' with."

River was watching her intently. "Neither do you."

Ahh, nice exchange there. I can picture River saying that to someone trying to harm her family.
Saturday, 23 June 2007 03:49
Utterly fabulous work here, AMDOBELL...though a bit too short for my tastes. Things just started getting good when you decided a cliffhanger was in order;)

BEB

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