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The Bequest - Part III

Friday, June 15, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal gets left something in Reilly's will, and it's likely to cause all sorts of problems! Please comment - getting from here to the end of the story is becoming problematical.

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Mal walked towards Serenity, his mind buzzing, not just with the hangover, but with the contents of the will. The thought uppermost in his mind was that, if Reilly hadn’t already been dead, he’d have killed him.

“Sir,” Zoe began. “Is this a good idea?”

“You got a better one?”

“We could always get them rooms in the town.”

“What with? We didn’t have the coin to keep them where they were.”

“But on board?”

“I'm open to suggestions.”

“I’ll try to think of some, sir.”

The Firefly came into view, and they continued in silence for a moment.

“Zoe, are you laughing?”

“No, sir.”

“’Cause if you’re laughing I ain’t above making a pregnant woman clean out the septic vat for a month.”

“I think my doctor might disapprove, sir.”

“It ain’t funny!”

“Actually, sir, I'm just imagining Freya’s face.”

“I don’t think you’re going to have to imagine for that long,” Mal said, sighing heavily.

“I wondered when you’d be getting back,” Freya smiled, standing on the middle catwalk as Mal and Zoe stepped into the cargo bay. “I thought we might …” She stopped as six young women filed in behind them. “Mal, I think you’re being followed.”

“Mmn?” He looked up at her, then glanced over his shoulder. “Oh, yeah.”

“Passengers?”

“Not exactly.”

“Oh?” She started slowly down the stairs. “So, what, you came over all insane and hired six new members of the crew? All girls?”

“Ain't crew neither.”

Freya gazed at him critically, reaching the bay floor. “So what are they?”

“They kinda … belong to me.”

His wife’s eyes opened a little wider, glancing at Zoe then back to her husband. “Would you mind running that by me again?”

“They belong to me. They’re Reilly’s … bequest.”

“His …” Freya stared at the girls, not one of them older than Kaylee. “You mean he owned them?”

“No, no,” Mal said quickly. “They’re his daughters.”

“They’re what?!”

“Please, Frey, don’t shout.” Mal squeezed the bridge of his nose.

“What the hell have you agreed to, Mal?”

“Nothing.” He

Comments
OATY
Friday, 15 June 2007 11:01
This is getting interesting!
As always your writing is superb, true to the characters and all! I have recently read my way through all your fan fics and finally caught up with the lates one. :)
Friday, 15 June 2007 11:28
Well, they did want more children, and didn't Mrs Freye's teas leaves said there would be more girls? Doesn't Inara want to start a finishing school? Still wondering about the mine shaft... You like doing this on weekends, don't you?
Friday, 15 June 2007 14:06
Well now, I didn't see that one coming! As always, your writing is brilliant. Remind me not to let Mrs. Frye read any tea leaves for me! hehe
Friday, 15 June 2007 16:13
Okay, never in a month of Sundays would I have come up with something this bizzare though that seems to be an apt description of that rogue Reilly. I am thinking the best person to be able to find somewhere for them to live and be brought up would be Inara, but would she be willing to help? Poor Mal, he never gets a break. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 15 June 2007 18:00
Looks like Inara is going to be getting some company ... I think that'd be shiny - she'd have six girls to raise and help make into ladies. Although Mal would probably be worried she'd try to make them Companions. But still, this is funny! I can only imagine what Kaylee and the rest of the crew will say!
Friday, 15 June 2007 18:52
ROFL! I could just see Joss doing this to poor Mal. I agree, Inara's is the best place for them.
Tuesday, 19 June 2007 00:11
Oh ho...if Reilly is still alive somewhere, Mal is definitely gonna kill him good! I just hope Inara has the space and willingness to help Mal out;)

Brilliant plot twist here, Jane0904...utterly brilliant! This is Joss-level story shininess:D

BEB

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