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The Prodigal Mother 17/?

Wednesday, June 13, 2007

eventual Rayne. When Jayne's ma dies, he discovers that while he's described as man ape gone wrong, by Simon his blood might just be bluer than either of the Tams. Who are Jayne's real parents? Why did they give him up? And why does River keep talking about a prodigal son? ALSO IN THIS CHAPTER... Lady Vera and River have a small conversation.

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“Where will we get nearly sixty-three thousand platinum out here?” Lady Vera rubbed her temple and sighed deeply. “What was I thinking?”

“My lady, if I remember correctly you informed me to make all the necessary arrangements for our trek into the outer rim,” Joon-mei said calmly.

“Yes... Joon-mei, are you trying to tell me you have sixty-three thousand credits on you?” her ladyship eyed her up and down as if to expect the money to fall out of her tunic.

“No. But I did bring with me two-hundred thousand platinum. I expected we might run into some money problems when you told me you'd be paying the Parthenon in credits. No doubt the captain was too polite to tell you they use mostly platinum on the rim, so he accepted. Of course, he probably has access to exchange credits to platinum easier than the captain of Serenity does.”

“Is this money of your own, Joon-mei or is it from credits you exchanged on behalf of myself?” Lady Vera asked suspiciously.

Joon-mei looked uncomfortable. “I do not have authority to do that, my lady.”

Lady Vera stood quickly. “I cannot allow you to use your personal money—”

“It is of no consequence my lady. If it will clear your conscious, you man repay me when we reach Persephone. If I may ask... why are we traveling to Persephone? ” She changed the subject.

“It's a ruse. I need some time with my son, I have an inkling he won't take the news of being my son well. Of course, I will be using that time to try and convince him to help Lord Adam. From the records I was able to acquire, he is a match for the operation my Adam needs. Once Jian—I mean Jayne agrees to the procedure, he will be able to help him. It's his—our only chance.” Her hands were fisted.

"And if he doesn't agree?”

Her mistress sighed. “He will, he can't deny his father. If I must, as a last resort, I shall do as I did with Captain Reynolds.”

“What do you mean? Threaten him into agreeing?” Joon-mei arched an eyebrow.

“No. Offer him a lot of money. It seems to be the one thing that makes people out

Comments
MERCENARYSONG
Wednesday, 13 June 2007 21:01
Excellent meahra. Great job. I like that you are developing at a good pace (not too slow and not too fast). Of course having said that I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE HOW JAYNE REACTS TO THE NEWS AND TO SEE HIS INTERACTIONS WITH HIS REAL MAMA!!!

The characters are spot on, and your (premise) storyline is awesome (especially that "Jayne" is actually "Jian"). Great story, keep it coming. I check everyday for the next chapter.

-mercsong


Friday, 15 June 2007 19:09
Aaaaagh!!! Oh my God, he's going to find out like, REALLY soon!!! I'm all agitated thinking about how this might go. Poor Jayne :-/

Great chapter though, especially the conversation with River, Mal and Lady Vera. I particularly liked this line:

“Well, I'm startin' to think havin' you around is a lot more fun. Looks like my scary little girl is scarier than yours,” Mal smirked in a 'my dad can beat up your dad' way.

Real funny. Good work!
Monday, 18 June 2007 02:42
Honestly? Mal's pissing contest with Lady Vera over who's got the more dangerous young female subordinate was just hilarious! Nathan, River and whomever would have played Vera and Joon-Mei would have just gone to town with this!

;D

Like mercenarysong and Wynter, I really can't wait to see how you have Jayne take the news he ain't who he thought he was. Can only imagine a pissed off Jayne strugging to grip this new information:(

BEB

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