Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Bequest

Wednesday, June 13, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. And a new arc begins ... Mal and the crew head to Verbena for the job for Pickett, but a wave changes things ...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3361    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

“This ain’t good.” Jayne tested the ropes tying him again, but they still wouldn’t budge. If they hadn’t taken his knife, he’d have been able to cut them loose, but right now he was totally incapacitated.

“You think you could state something more than the blindingly obvious?” Mal asked, his own efforts at getting free only cutting into his wrists, making the rope slick.

“Just saying, Mal.”

“Well, don’t.”

“Figure the girls are out there?”

“Hope not.”

“Yeah, me too, but you think they are?”

“Probably.” Mal squirmed, trying to get his hand out of the wet bonds.

“You’re cutting yourself to ribbons,” Jayne said, glancing over.

“Yeah, well, don’t see you doing no better.”

“If’n I could get to ya, maybe we could do something.”

“Somehow I’ve a notion that’s unlikely.” Mal leaned back against the mine support he was tied to.

Jayne eyed the barrels of gunpowder. “Ya know, they could’ve been more considerate. Leaving that stuff so close.”

Mal turned his head. “You think?”

“I mean, it ain't like we’re gonna –“

“Shh.” Mal tilted his head.

“What?”

“Listen.”

“Don’t hear …” He stopped, his body totally still. “Shit.”

“Is that what I think it is?”

“Think so.”

They both turned towards the slight sound, a susurration that barely registered.

From out in the darkness of the tunnel, sparking like a damn firework, the flame raced along the fuse, splitting as it headed for the barrels.

“Shit.”

-

--

---

Six days earlier …

It had been nearly a week since the operation, and Freya was healing fast. She and Mal had been using their temporary quarters again, but right now Simon was just finishing his latest check up.

“I wish I could bottle your body’s ability,” the young man said, shaking his head at her as she carefully sat up on the medbed. “I could make a fortune.”

“Apart from the rest of us getting over the slings and arrows that outrageous fortune throws at us once in a while,” Mal added, smiling at his wife.

“Well, if I knew how,

Comments
Wednesday, 13 June 2007 14:08
What a brilliant start! The notion of Mal and Jayne tied up in a mine while a lit fuse approaches a gorram pile of gunpowder is not a happy thought, especially with Jayne not having a knife hidden on him and the two of them being tied to mine supports and unable to get to each other to untie the knots. Can't wait to find out how they got in that predicament. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 13 June 2007 16:44
Mal and Jayne tied to barrels of gun powder just makes me giggle - if only because I can so aptly picture Nathan and Adam have a field day with it!

I absolutely adored River and Simon's interaction - I love the two of them together, angsty, fluffy and everything in between. It's awesome! Great beginning!
Wednesday, 13 June 2007 18:07
*hums happily* We're off on another adventure! I can't wait to see what's happening next!!
Wednesday, 13 June 2007 18:47
I can just see the set in my head too. Giggling too. You better get Mal and Jayne out fast. Or who knows what will happen to you. LOL.

Sunday, 17 June 2007 22:03
Yep...the opening was all kinds of brilliant, Jane0904. Only thing that would have improved it was if Mal and Jayne were nekkid and tied to the posts!

;D

Really can't wait to see how you get things going all pear-shaped for the crew...especially since I figure Lucas Reilly ain't as dead as he should be;)

BEB

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.