Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Not There Yet - Part IX

Tuesday, June 12, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. The operation went well, but it's time to leave Phoros. Thank you for commenting ... I hope you enjoy the conclusion!

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The fires had finally died down, and once in a while a log broke open to release a haze of sparks into the night sky.

“Fireflies,” River said softly, cradled against Jayne’s chest. She’d had a couple of drinks, just to be sociable, and now felt decidedly fuzzy.

“’Cept those ones last only a second.” He grinned. “Aw, hell, he can’t play.”

“What?” She glanced up into his face. “Who?”

Jayne nodded towards the musicians. “That feller on the guitar. He keeps hitting bum notes.”

“Maybe you should take over.”

“Nah.” A chuckle rumbled through him. “Sure couldn’t do as bad, though.”

“No, I mean it. Why don’t you play?”

His hand, which had been stroking her shoulder, paused. “Ya think?”

“Sing for me, Jayne.”

“What’d ya wanna hear, moonbrain?”

A Maid A’Roving .”

“That’s too sad.”

“Would it make you cry?” she teased.

“Might. Wouldn’t do my rep any good if anyone saw me burst into tears.”

“Then what about Come Lay With Me ?”

“You suggesting I sing it, or do it?”

“Both.”

“Which first?”

“Song first, Jayne. Then we’ll see.”

He got to his feet and grinned. “Best offer I've had all day.”

---

Kaylee was watching Bethany as she played with some of the younger Frye cousins, her cousins, it took her mother a moment to realise.

“She’s a beauty,” Ellie said, coming up and putting her arm around her daughter. “Just like you.”

“I ain't beautiful, Momma.”

“Of course you are.”

“You have to say that. You’re my ma.”

“I don’t have to say anything, Kaylee.” She stroked her daughter’s shiny brown hair out of her face. “And you are.”

They stood together in companionable silence until Kaylee spoke again. “I wonder sometimes, if’n Bethany shouldn’t be with kids her own age.”

“And what’s that?”

“What?”

“Her age, Kaylee. She may not be three yet, on a calendar, but she’s older’n that. Ain't she?”

“Simon says she’s very advanced. And I can see it, course I can, and I’m proud’a her. But it worries me too.”

“That

Comments
Tuesday, 12 June 2007 12:02
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story line. So nice to see family forming, and Kaylee's dad considering Mal family was a sweet touch.
Tuesday, 12 June 2007 12:35
Okay, I have now melted into a puddle of absolutely happy goo! That was a beautiful ending to this story! And I'm eagerly awaiting your next one!
Tuesday, 12 June 2007 22:40
I absolutely loved Ethan finally calling Frey 'mama'. How perfect is that? And the Fryes considering Serenity's crew family was a lovely heart warming touch. This was fabulous, *xie xie ni*. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 15 June 2007 04:09
Oh...this was all kinds of fabulous, Jane0904! Between Ethan's first verbal recognition of Ethan as his momma to Eddie Frye's declaration of Serenity's crew being family...I was a puddle of goo like slumming;)

BEB
Tuesday, 20 October 2009 18:49
LOVED IT!!!! whew!! heady stuff.

Next arc...... -->

as I turn the page...

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