Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Not There Yet - Part VII

Sunday, June 10, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Simon explains the problem, and begins the operation. Forgive me if the medical stuff is inaccurate, but I have tried! And please comment. Please?

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“What?” “Why?” Mal and Freya spoke over each other.

“I need to operate,“ Simon repeated. The original scans were inconclusive, but when I used the hospital imager …” He paused, watching Freya unconsciously press the palm of her hand into the crease of her hip, as if just the thought made it hurt. “Anyway, this allowed me to see what had happened.”

“And?” Mal prompted. “Simon, please.”

“After Wing’s men … hurt you, there must have been an infection in the bone, the head of the femur to be precise. That’s the long bone that runs down the thigh …”

Freya nodded. “I know what it is, doc. Go on.”

“I didn’t pick it up at the time because of the damage to your pelvis. The breaks meant I could only stabilise –”

“I remember.” She shuddered slightly, the trembling communicating through to Mal. Neither of them was likely to ever forget the aftermath of what Wing did, the weeks of pain and anguish, let alone the emotional mutilation.

“The point is that I couldn’t examine that area too well.”

“But you gave Frey antibiotics. I remember that too,” Mal said.

“I did. And they cleared the infections. The problem is the damage this particular one did.”

“Damage.”

Simon crossed to his screen, bringing up one of the scans on it. “There are microfissures in the bone, invisible without the use of the imager, and even then only on a particular view.” He ran a finger down a network of bright red lines. “If we hadn’t found it, if I hadn’t been looking, it could have blown without warning.”

Mal stared. “Blown?”

“More or less exploded. Any undue force or pressure and the femoral head could have shattered into fragments.”

Mal’s grip on Freya was tight, but it tightened more. “And if that had happened?”

“There’s an artery runs …” Simon stopped. “It would have been bad.”

“But you caught it,” she said, forcing herself to breathe.

“Yes.”

“So that was causing the limp.”

“No.”

Mal and Freya exchanged glances. “What … there’s more?” she whispered.

“It’s your body,

Comments
Sunday, 10 June 2007 18:01
This is all manner of tense, but I love it! You really know how to get a person's attention! Great job!
Sunday, 10 June 2007 19:08
I love how everyone is affected in some way by what's happening. Even Hank knows something is up. That shows how close the entire crew is and I think that's lovely.

This is terrifically tense - I can't wait to read more. Maybe a little interaction between Bethie, River and Jayne, that could be hugely interesting ...
Sunday, 10 June 2007 20:40
Well now...the whole crew is sensing something is going down that isn't rainbows and puppies, huh? Gotta wonder if Bethie's abilities are ramping up unconsciously due to the anxiety she's feeling. Certainly would be one way around the "no peeking" issue if she can broadcast the sensation of something being wrong to everyone in her family:(

Sunday, 10 June 2007 21:59
I don't know much about the medical side either but it sounds good. I just hope that everything goes OK.
Sunday, 10 June 2007 22:42
Oh good gorram, I'm not going to have any nails left! Poor Freya, poor Mal, poor Simon thinking he could have found out earlier only you can't second guess something like this. Thank goodness Mal insisted Simon check her out otherwise she could have fallen or jarred her hip and we might have had no more Freya. Doesn't bear thinking about. I am glad that Kaylee didn't go to pieces when she found out what had happened but calmly set to and helped. And I love how everyone somehow feels off-centre as if a deep part of them knows something isn't right. Loved River thinking of little Bethie and taking her some place where her mind would be naturally shielded from what was happening to Freya. Please let the operation be a success, that poor lady has been through more than anyone else in the 'verse and deserves a happy outcome. Ali D
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