Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

SECOND CHANCES: Chapter 16

Saturday, June 9, 2007

The crew returns to Sihnon and begins to recover. Kaylee seeks comfort from Simon while Simon forms an alternate plan. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara, River/Rafe. NC-17 for "comfort."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3613    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

A/N: This chapter is a bit short, but is rated NC-17 for some, ah, "comfort."

Thanks to everyone for your great comments. I swear I am almost finished with the third part of this trilogy: Unforeseen Consequences, which is shaping up to be about 20 chapters and an epilogue. As a reminder, this story is 24 chapters and an epilogue, so we've still got a ways to go.

Thanks to Leiasky for the beta.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Chapter 16

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

Simon watched anxiously as the ambulance settled into its normal berth on the hospital’s landing platform. His arm around Kaylee’s shoulders, both of them were unable to do more than stare as the small vehicle opened its doors and a team of medics rushed out three gurneys. From their current vantage point, just inside the emergency room’s sliding doors, all they could do was watch, any discussion or other noise separated from them by the soundproof glass.

With a whoosh of admittance, the doors opened and they were assaulted by a cacophony of sounds. Barked orders and vitals were rattled off, as doctors moved in to take over where the medics had left off. Simon and Kaylee turned as one, staring at the broken bodies of their comrades, as River and Zoe slowly made their way inside, their faces drawn tight.

River moved towards her brother automatically, enveloping him and Kaylee in a hug. Simon held her back, whispering a few words of gratitude for all she’d done and her safe return, while Kaylee continued to stare in silence. Glancing into her friend’s dull green eyes, River brushed some hair back from her cheek and whispered, “We will find them, Kaylee.”

Nodding minutely, Kaylee swallowed and watched as Mal’s unconscious form was wheeled towards the nearest operating room, while Jayne and Rafe were taken to separate rooms. Like some form of demented parade, Simon, River, Kaylee and Zoe followed.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

River was at Rafe’s side, her bruised and burned hand claspin

Comments
Saturday, 09 June 2007 17:24
Wow.

Love it. Awesome smut. And some very heartbreaking bedside scenes as well. Perfect mix! Can't wait for the next chapter :D xxx
Saturday, 09 June 2007 17:26
GO Simon!!

I hope he has a great "top 3%" idea that will save the day. It would make me happy.

I'm egarly waiting for the next xhapter. Kepp up thae great writeing.
Saturday, 09 June 2007 22:53
Glad that Inara is back with Mal having had her words with those disingenuous folk in the Guild. I can't wait to find out what kind of idea Simon has had, hopefully it will be one which will help them track down the *tamade hundan* who have Kaylee's family. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 10 June 2007 14:56
So glad I've finally had the time to catch back up with reading this! Lovely from beginning to end, as always!
Sunday, 10 June 2007 18:34
Oh....I am so torn! I wanna soley rant on about the unbelievably hot level of smut you had going between Simon and Kaylee...but that excludes the awesome work you did here with the angst over Mal, Jayne and Rafe's conditions, along with Simon's hopefully cunning plan. And the opposite is true as well:(

Guess I'll just have to say you've once again managed to hit a whole bunch of nails on their heads at the same time;D

BEB
Monday, 11 June 2007 03:02
Simon is a genius criminal mastermind, I can't wait until his plan is revealed. I'm thinking Kaylee won't in any way like it. . . .

Poor woman keeps using sex to try and push away the despair. I wonder when it will stop working?

I'm glad the crew's plan didn't work. Everything can't go right for them on the first attempt at everything. . . They're just lucky no one died. . .

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.