Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Not There Yet - Part V

Friday, June 8, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. A daring rescue is mounted, and a heroine discovered. Please leave comments, good or bad. 2BF?

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“You want to explain that comment?” Mal asked his men as they almost fell into the room.

“Feds!” Hank said tersely.

“What?” Mal hurried to the door and peered out. There was no sign of any unusual activity. “You sure you didn’t inhale something you weren't supposed to?”

“They’re everywhere, Mal,” Jayne said. “Surprised we managed to get here at all.”

“What’ve you done?” the captain asked, turning on the two men.

“Nothing!” the big man insisted. “Weren’t us, Mal.”

Hank put his canvas holdall down carefully. “I asked one of the nurses,” he put in. “’Parently the Feds do the occasional sweep, checking everyone’s who they say they are. Seems this place gets a number of wanted criminals coming in for medical treatment.”

“Really.” Mal’s tone was dry.

“Yeah.” Hank couldn’t help it – he smiled slightly. “’Pears this far out there’s a lot of call for the odd bit of facial reconstruction, bullet removal … that kind of thing.”

“You mean we could’ve just bribed our way in?”

“Seems like it.”

“Mal.” Simon pulled the memory tab from the machine and dropped it into his pocket. “I'm still a wanted fugitive.”

“You think I need reminding?” Mal helped Freya from the chair.

“And I'm masquerading as a woman,” Hank said, earning an odd look from his captain. “Can we instead talk about getting the hell out of here?”

Mal nodded. “A reasonable request, given the circumstances.” He thought for a moment. “How many are there?”

“At least a squad. Looked like more,” Jayne said. “Mal, they got all the entrances covered. And I mean all.”

“The one we came in –“ Simon began.

“That too.”

“Frey?” Mal turned to his wife. “I think we might need that heroic rescue I joked about.”

“Mmn.” She wasn't looking at him, her eyes focused on nothing. “Working on it.”

---

“Auntie River?” Bethany came up silently and took the psychic’s hand.

“I know, sweetie,” River said softly. She looked around for Zoe, catching her eye.

Serenity’s first mate hurried over. “What?”

Comments
Friday, 08 June 2007 15:53
Oh, come on, guys. Is it that bad? Someone must have something to say!
Friday, 08 June 2007 18:17
Hey, I have something to say, and I loved it! And Jane0904 it's the weekend and feedback is always slower. If you're bored you could always try leaving feedback on my fic. I just loved the Big Damn Rescue, BIG being the operative word as it took every single Frye turning up en masse and then the littlest Frye to stage her crying for daddy fit. Wonderful! The girl has earned a whole kennel full of puppies. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 08 June 2007 18:19
By the way when I say it is the weekend, I am in the UK and ours starts after work ends on a Friday. Just so you don't think I can't read the calendar. LOL. Just love this series of yours. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 08 June 2007 18:43
Fantastic chapter as always. I really loved Mal, Jayne, Simon and Freya being rescued by the Frye's and Bethany. And she'll likely not evernlet her father forget about it!
Friday, 08 June 2007 20:12
All the women on Serenity, including the littlest, are just so kick-ass it ain't even funny! Loved this one, and sorry I didn't have time to comment before!!
Friday, 08 June 2007 21:26
This was adorable! Never mind Bethany saving all of their skins, but the banter between everyone, including the Fryes was spot-on! I absolutely adored it. I can't wait for more!

2BF! 2BF!
Friday, 08 June 2007 23:58
Oh...Bethany is gonna SO much more of a handful than River was when she was her niece's age! Though I hope Bethany would have slightly less ego than her biological aunt...;D

Utterly fantastic work here, Jane0904! Would have been all kinds of hell, logistically...but I would have given a valuable body part to have seen this filmed as part of an episode;D

BEB
Saturday, 09 June 2007 02:56
Loved your ending and Bethany's solution to the rescue. Totally adored the Mal Hank interaction and all that it said about the relationship between them. Wish all the rescues could go this smooth - guess that's what happens when geniuses are involved!

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