Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Not There Yet - Part IV

Thursday, June 7, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. The party continues, but Mal and Simon take a slight detour ... It only takes a moment to comment, and it can make a humble writer feel so very happy!

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“Zoe, you seen Simon?” Kaylee was out of breath from dancing, each of the male Frye’s demanding she take at least one turn around the floor.

“Simon?” Zoe swallowed the mouthful of chicken leg she was munching on.

“Yeah, you know. My husband. Bethany’s daddy. The man I make yell my name when I –“

“He’s around somewhere.”

“Only I ain’t seen him for a while, and I kinda wanted to snuggle a little.”

Zoe smiled. “Getting tired?”

“Hell, no!” Kaylee grabbed a thing on a stick from the table and bit into it. “Oh, this is heaven. Can’t believe they got real meat.”

“I know. I ain't eaten this well for a long time.”

“Well, not since Lazarus, anyway. And as nice as that Mrs Boden’s cooking is, it ain't a patch on my Ma’s.” Kaylee giggled. “And if you see my husband anywhere around, tell him I'm looking for him.”

“Will do.”

Kaylee snagged a handful more of the skewers and wandered back into the family gathering.

“How long’re they gonna be?” Zoe murmured.

River, like a ghost next to her, picked up a strawberry and licked the tip. “They’ve only just arrived.”

---

The shuttle settled next to a variety of other vehicles, most of them even more beat up than theirs.

“What is this?” Mal asked. “Some kind of convention?”

“It’s the only hospital on the planet,” Simon explained. “Even if most of the locals won’t come here, it’s bound to pull in any number of off-worlders.”

“So you’re figuring we might get lost in the crowd?”

“I'm hoping to.” He had brought up the schematics of the building on the Cortex. “There’s several entrances, but I think our best bet is through this one, right here.” He tapped the screen.

“Seems like a plan. Well done, doc.” Mal tugged the waistcoat of his EMT outfit into place, then saw Freya gazing at him. “What?”

“I’d forgotten how good you look in a uniform,” she said, smiling.

“Hey, what about us?” Hank asked, throwing out his arms and barely managing to miss punching Jayne in the face. “Don’t we look pretty?”

“Adorable.

Comments
Thursday, 07 June 2007 13:25
I liked the banter between Hank and Jayne in this one - and the cliffhanger. Keep going :)
Thursday, 07 June 2007 14:45
Yikes, and double yikes! Jayne's last comment does not bode well, but what scared me the most was Bethie beginning a statement to Zoe, and then stopping herself. That sounds all manner of ominous to me! Great job!
Thursday, 07 June 2007 15:59
I too am worried about Bethany starting a statement to Zoe and stopping. You'd think though that if it was bad, she would have said something after Zoe told her she could talk to her. You know, it's gotta be really hard on a little kid - there are so many shades of gray in the "no peeking" rule, how can she hope to keep them all straight? Although Freya yelling at her to get out of her head was pretty much priceless.

I'm really hoping that if something awful we're going to happen, River would know by now. But then again, she's not omnipotent.
Thursday, 07 June 2007 22:52
Uh oh, what did Jayne and Hank do? Everything was going far too smooth, wasn't it? There was me thinking little Bethie would blurt it out and then she didn't though that doesn't mean what she saw was necessarily bad but given the crew's propensity for attracting trouble I won't hold my breath. Just hope our boys get away with the information Simon needs to heal Freya. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 08 June 2007 16:16
Personally? I really think Bethie is more powerful than River or Freya, in that her abilities are not latent but basically active from the time she was born onward. Both older women had years to develop as individuals before getting their abilities, so they have a better idea what's ok to announce to the world and what's not (though River and Bethie have the quirk of being a bit wacky with their freaky mind powers;D). So I can imagine Bethie's a bit...swamped with what she seems to know about what's gonna happen in the near future:(

And what in the name of Buddha's left testicle did Jayne and Hank do?! Everything seemed fine till the came barging in like they were on fire:(

BEB

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