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The Dark Chronicles: The Prologue - The Girl

Thursday, June 7, 2007

A man who betrayed his own side in the War for Independence which side he betrayed is another story,now a bounty hunter searches his days trying to find the meaning of life.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2627    RATING: 6.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Name of the Fan Fiction: The Dark Chronicles

Genre: Action/Fan Fiction

Author: Darkfly

Time Period: After Serenity

BDFDR (Big Damn F*cking Darkfly Rating Board): The chapters could be any of the following ratings but the majority of the chapters are 12A’s or 15’s with the few exceptions

12A, 15, or 18 (to the US, PG-13, R, or NC17)

Author Notes: This is my 1st ever fan faction, it’s actually my 1st ever completed story I’ve written, since most stories haven’t been interesting enough to actually finish. Don’t mind if my writing ain’t that good. It will coincide with Tina’s (TinaDoll) Verse & some stories will be intertwined into each other’s stories or related. My friends say I have a slightly odd sense of humor, you have been warned, just wait until the ant scene in Chapter 7.

Disclaimer: Firefly & Serenity are the rights of Fux (yeah I said Fux, sound cool wouldn’t you agree it should be there permanent name from now onwards), Universal, & Joss Whedon & in no way is this an official byproduct of Firefly or Serenity. Fux just you remember you cancelled Firefly, Drive, Dark Angel Family Guy twice, Tru Calling, & many other classic shows, you bastards.


Rating: 12A or PG-13 rated

The following contains: Occasional Moderate Swearing, Moderate Violence, & No Sex(honest), okay there is mild reference to a whore


Prologue: The Girl

He starts to run toward the small hills in the distance, panting heavily,

thinking “I’m getting too old for this shit”,

checks his watch seven, six, five, four, three, he jumps to the ground surrounded by the long grass which in compass’s this planet called “Nature” then looking confused turns his head slowly to look back…“BOOM”, his head gets flown into the ground by the shear aftershock of the explosion,

“Got to stop using black-market timers”, he says to himself.

He starts the descent to the top of the hill, he reaches the top and he then turns a

Comments
Thursday, 07 June 2007 11:26
This might be good, but it's difficult to tell. I would suggest you take some time to check out other fics, particularly in the way to layout paragraphs. For instance, as a general rule, you use a new paragraph for each person's speech, which makes it a lot easier to read. Try it. You can always update.
Thursday, 07 June 2007 12:00
I've changed it a bit, hope it's a bit better, I've never done any fan fic ever let alone online so I'm not used to it.
Friday, 08 June 2007 15:48
If it wasn't for the structuring and typographic issues...this would all kinds of bloody hilarious! Definitely can get behind this kind of wisecracking fella;D

BEB

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