Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

A Lost Art - Part 7

Thursday, June 7, 2007

Post-BDM; A letter or two (or five) were sent out from Serenity's crew and suddenly, they seem to find themselves in danger. It's all Joss's characters and 'verse, i'm just borrowing it for a spell... As always, comments are so extremely welcome!!!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3005    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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No air had ever tasted sweeter after the pungent stench of Wardy's den. Jayne coughed a few times and spat, trying to remove the taste of the acrid and stale reek from his mouth and nose. Mal took it all in stride, but secretly wished he could scrub the place from his clothes and body before speaking to civilized people again. Hell, before speaking to uncivilized people again.

Despite the man's affection for anything that could be smoked and his deep-rooted hatred for open windows, Wardy had the best prices on all manner of merchandise - and the best connections in the quadrant. Mal could always count on a tip for a job, should he pay a visit to the smoke-filled hole in the wall. And because Mal never mentioned the stench - unlike some other smugglers Wardy had dealt with - the old coot felt an odd affection for the Browncoat and gave him the best tips and haggled less enthusiastically over prices on supplies.

This time had been no different. Wardy had even noticed Mal's right arm never left the pocket of his duster (Mal had opted to not use the sling, so as not to appear a walking target) and threw in a fresh crate of meds and bandages. The old man gave the smuggler a name that might prove profitable in the future as he lit another clove cigarette, and then offered a word of caution.

"There's men looking for a Firefly," Wardy wheezed softly. "Offering the shiny coin and pretty little promises to those with directions."

"I know how tempting that coin can be," Mal said slowly, searching the man's face for a hint of worse news.

"Not as tempting as continued business with my friend Reynolds," Wardy grinned, his yellow teeth showing the start of decay. "A shiny coin does me some nice now, but what happens when my friends cannot trust me to deal honestly? Who offers me shiny coins then, I ask you?"

"Who indeed," Mal mused, his respect for the man increasing. Badger would have taken the coin in half a heartbeat.

"If I was on a Firefly, though," Wardy went on. "I'd be extra careful. Those

Comments
EPM0001
Thursday, 07 June 2007 02:09
This is so good. I can't wait to read more.
Thursday, 07 June 2007 03:15
This is SOOO good. The suspense keeps you on the edge of your seat. Looking forward to next installment.
Thursday, 07 June 2007 04:18
Wow, really lucky Mal's being observant. Would Kaylee really have done something that risky with her baby? I guess if she thought the alternative could be worse... wow.

And that last line, her telling Mal to remember the stabilizer needed to be replaced, that's just perfect! Even in a letter like that, she's still thinking of her "girl".

jW
Thursday, 07 June 2007 06:39
Wow - this went in a direction I totally didn't expect and I LOVE that! I think Kaylee would do something that risky, if she truly did believe the alternative was worse. I too am very glad that Mal found Hobie though and I just loved his little chat with the guy - "your idiot parents" - ha!

I feel terrible for Kaylee as I know she has just got to be completely bereft. She has no idea if her son's all right or her husband. Yikes. I see much more angst in their futures!
Thursday, 07 June 2007 09:58
I loved this to bits! What particularly impressed me is you showing that Kaylee has smarts too and not just towards mechanical things. She is thinking clear and putting the baby first which was awesomely done, trusting her Captain to keep Hobie safe. Personally I think Mal should find a safe bolt hole with folks that can be trusted and would not be known to Simon's parents before going after the rest of the crew. Can't wait for the next part, this is so shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 07 June 2007 14:49
This is simply excellent. I didn't expect at ALl what kaylee would do and had NO idea when the mention of her missing hammock came up, that she'd wrap her son in it. Very nice twist.

The best conversation had to be Mal and Hobie. Idiot parents and first, killing some things. Just perfect! Kaylee's letter came in a very close second to being my favorite part of this.

Loving the tension and I hope they're all together again soon. Can't be easy for new parents to be separated from their baby.
Thursday, 07 June 2007 14:53
Oooft *lets out breath she was holding*

That was amazing, and I loved that Kaylee was so smart and determined enough not to let the evil grandparents get Hobie, that she thought of hiding him on the ship. Now I just hope she and Zoe don't come to too much harm when those hun-dan realise that the baby's not there.

Also really liked the last line about Serenity, it's typical Kaylee. And Mal's line too - "but first, we're gonna kill some folk". YAS!

Excited about the next part, woo!
Friday, 08 June 2007 08:42
Ohhh...this was just all kinds of brilliant, kacidilla! I was utterly floored by your idea of having Kaylee hide Hobie in the engine room, betting on Mal being observant enough to notice her hammock missing and take a close look at the compartment in order to find the little one. Oh..and Mal's conversation to Hobie? Hilarious and totally Mal;)

BEB
Monday, 17 September 2007 17:01
Yep, I totally love how Kaylee would mention "her girl" after telling the Cap'n to keep her boy safe! You know she couldn't resist writing that.

"'But first, we're gonna kill some folk,' he concluded."

That's classic!

:-)

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