Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Not There Yet - Part III

Wednesday, June 6, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. While the party continues, Simon gathers his troops ... Please let me know what you think!

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The sun had passed its zenith and was beginning to head down into the afternoon, while two great fires had been constructed and lit. The delicious smells of food cooking wafted across.

“Sit. Sit!” Bethany said, staring at her puppy. Fiddler just rolled over and waved his legs in the air.

“That ain't how you do it,” Joe Frye said. “You gotta show them what to do.”

“How?”

Joe picked the dog up and planted his four feet in the dirt. “You push his bottom down and say ‘sit’ at the same time.”

“Show me?” She smiled at him.

“You ain't like any two year old I know of,” Joe laughed. “But I can sure see a hell of a lot of Kaylee in you.”

“Mustn’t swear,” Bethany said firmly. “That’s bad.”

“You know, I think you’re probably right.” Joe sat down on the ground next to her. “Come on. I’ll show you how to train this ball of fluff.”

“His name’s Fiddler.” She looked down proudly at her puppy, then covered her mouth with her hand as the little dog relieved himself, just leaning forward and letting it happen, the puddle growing ever bigger beneath him.

Joe laughed. “Somehow I don’t think Fiddler’s quite the right name.”

Bethany giggled.

“You want more children,” Eleanor Frye said, coming up behind Freya where she sat at one of the tables, her footfalls soft on the dry, dusty earth.

Watching Bethany and the youngest Frye boy playing with the golden puppy, Freya nodded. “A girl.”

“For your husband to spoil.”

“Something like that.”

Ellie smiled and sat down next to her. “That’s how Eddie was. All those boys and he so wanted a girl. I think we’d have had hundreds if’n it meant getting a girl for him.”

Freya laughed. “Well, you’ve certainly got a good one in Kaylee.”

“And little Bethany.” She watched Joe lift her granddaughter into the air, making the little girl squeal with delight. “She’s a darling.”

“That she is.”

“Kaylee says … she tells me you’re psychic.”

Freya was surprised. “I didn’t … that’s not exactly common knowledge.”

“And it won’t go fur

Comments
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 16:04
Is there a problem with this I know nothing about?
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 18:35
This is great! I'm very, very worried about Simon's plan. This cannot turn out well ... I'm having such a bit of anxiety over this.

And boy is Kaylee going to be pissed when she finds out they've all left!
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 20:08
I certainly hope for Freya's sake that Ellie was all kinds of right about her getting pregnant with a girl soon enough. Cuz as much as Freya loves Ethan...a daughter would do her good mentally.

And I too have to wonder how Simon's plan could backfire. Admittedly, his plan for the Ariel heist was perfect except for Jayne being a doink...but when you get all the male BDHs and Freya together? Things will happen;)

BEB
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 21:28
Absolutely no problem with this at all, my dear! Would have responded sooner but the @#$% internet's been down! Very intriguing storyline here, and an interesting point that all the women in Kaylee's family have special gifts. Keep it coming!
Thursday, 07 June 2007 07:31
Mrs Frye didn't actually say that Freya would have a baby girl just that she could see one coming soon - I have my fingers and toes crossed that Simon finds out what is wrong and can fix it, without getting them all arrested into the bargain. I think River would have had an inkling if it was too risky for them to go. As for Kaylee being mad if she found out the men had snuck out, I think if she found out it was for Freya she wouldn't get in a funk. After all, how can you blame people for caring about each other and she does have her big damn family all around her. Just hope this time it goes smooth. Ali D :~)
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