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Not There Yet - Part I

Monday, June 4, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Serenity's crew go visiting Kaylee's family on Phoros. A longish chapter to introduce a new story arc. Let me know if you like/loathe it!

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Bethany was bouncing on Hank’s lap. “Is that it?” she asked, pointing out of the bridge window at the jewel hanging in the black.

“That’s it.”

She stared. “Ooh.”

“Phoros,” Hank agreed. “Where your Ma grew up, and where your grandparents live.”

“Soon?”

“Soon.” He smiled and put his arm around her little waist. “If I don’t die of terminal bruising before then.”

Bethany turned and put her lips to his cheek. “Kiss it better.”

Hank laughed. “You know, I think it does.”

“Hey, are you cheating on me?” Zoe asked, coming onto the bridge.

“Can’t help it,” Hank said. “Got this beautiful young lady in my lap … it’s something of a foregone conclusion.”

“So me and mine are gonna end up helpless, on the drift?” She sat down in the co-pilot’s chair, ostentatiously rubbing the bulge at her waist.

Bethany climbed carefully off Hank’s lap and looked into her eyes. “Uncle Hank loves you,” she said solemnly.

“I know, sweetpea,” Zoe said, lifting her up to sit on her thigh. “And he knows what would happen if I caught him cheating on me.”

Bethany giggled, covering her mouth, and Hank managed to look pained.

“We gonna crash?” Mal asked, stepping over the sill.

“No sir,” Hank said, turning back to his controls, ostentatiously correcting their flight path by half a degree.

“Good. Don’t wanna be crashing today. Not when Kaylee’s so all fired up for meeting up with her folks again.”

“Going to see Grandma and Grandpa,” Bethany said.

“That you are, squirt,” Mal smiled.

“Going to be fun.”

“You got Fiddler all cleaned up and ready?”

“All ready.” Bethany grinned.

“What about you?” He stroked her hair. “You all ready?”

“Bethie!” Kaylee’s voice echoed along the corridor. “Get back here now!”

“Not ready yet,” Bethany said with a sigh, climbing down from Zoe’s lap. She swung her cast dispiritedly as she walked slowly off the bridge.

Mal chuckled.

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Serenity landed at the dock, settling easily into her space. The cargo bay doors opened and the ramp l

Comments
Monday, 04 June 2007 13:20
This is just so incredibly sweet! I have this huge smile plastered across my face at the thought of it all! Thanks for a happy moment in the life of the crew!
Monday, 04 June 2007 13:49
Wow! Sounds like Bethany's about to get a lot of practice in "not peeking". I always like your angst, but I also like a good humorous romp, and I see lately that you have that in you as well. Are you sure that your last name isn't Whedon, Petrie, Espinson, or any number of other Mutant Enemy writers? At any rate, thanks for sharing your talents with us. Grr, Argh!
Monday, 04 June 2007 17:18
This was terrific! I had a feeling Kaylee's family had something up their sleeves when they didn't show once Serenity had docked. This is just great!

Can't wait for more. There is going to be a wee bit of angst, isn't there? Just a wee bit?!?!?
Monday, 04 June 2007 20:03
Oh wonderful! I was hoping Kaylee's folks were going to spring a surprise especially after not being there to meet Serenity when she landed. Just love little Bethie and Ethan and Kaylee's mum is just how I imagined she would be. Perfect! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 03:53
Wonderfully warm and fuzzy feelings from this one. It's a nice little glimpse into their world.
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 05:19
It continues to amaze me, but angst or fluff...you still knock them out of the park, Jane0904! Definitely loved this chapter start to finish:D

Especially glad that the reason for the Fryes not showing up to greet Serenity was that they were planning a surprise party for Kaylee and the crew. I definitely hoped for that scenario, though I was anticipating something darker;)

BEB

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