Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Opening Door - 9

Saturday, June 2, 2007

The job is on, but things don't exactly go to plan.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1615    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Inara felt … odd. Something was wrong. Perhaps it was just the feeling of Serenity sitting on the ground rather than flying through the black. But that wasn’t unusual. Sometimes there were days when they were waiting for work, waiting for payment … just waiting. But this …

She pressed the com. “Kaylee, is there anything wrong?”

It took a moment for a flustered mechanic to answer. “No … no … nothing’s wrong.”

Inara smiled. “Then I’m sorry for interrupting you.”

“Why’d you think there was?”

“Just a … it’s nothing.”

“Oh. Okay.” Kaylee switched off the com and turned to Simon who was leaning against the engine housing, his chest naked. “Think she’s okay?”

“Why wouldn’t she be?” He reached for her but she danced away.

“Because it ain’t usual for her to ask.”

“I mean, if there was a problem with the job, they’d let us know, right?”

Kaylee paused in the doorway. “I guess.”

He crossed his arms across his bare chest. “So why don’t you come here?”

“Well, might be because you’re a mite greasy.”

“So are you. And it was your idea for me to take my shirt off so I wouldn’t get it dirty.”

“It’s too fine to get all mucked up from Serenity’s parts.”

“How about if it gets all mucked from your parts?” He smiled a little.

“Why, Doctor Tam, I don’t know what you mean.”

Suddenly he was all seriousness. Standing up straight he lowered his arms, and she could see a faint pink flush across his chest. “Kaylee, there’s something I want to say. Something I’ve wanted to say for a long while, but I was afraid.”

“You? Afraid?” She tried to make it a joke, but the words stuck in her throat. Was this it? The moment he was going to say he’d decided to take his sister and leave, go back to the Core where he belonged?

“Me. Afraid.” He took one step towards her. “Kaylee, I care about you. And I’m terrified I’m going to say the wrong thing, put my foot firmly back in my mouth. You make my mind crazy, turn it all around, and the words seem to get mixed up. Rem

Comments
Saturday, 02 June 2007 10:08
Gorramit, Cap'n got shot again! I really think it's about time Simon stocked up on Mal's blood type. Hell, get a few pints in for everybody! Very happy that Simon finally told Kaylee how he felt, and now Inara's doing the same with Mal. Is it something in the recycled air? Just don't let Mal die, *dong ma*? I'm holding out for a double wedding. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 02 June 2007 17:21
This was all kinds of warm and fuzzy! I'm so glad that Simon was able to admit his true feelings to Kaylee and even more glad that Inara was able to admit hers to Mal. But just because she's going to give up being a companion doesn't mean Mal is miraculously not going to come back hurt anymore. I'm a bit worried it's not going to work as they hope it will.

But still, my little shipper heart can dream!
Sunday, 03 June 2007 03:45
This is all kinds of freaking brilliant, Roguette...but how does Mal constantly coming back from jobs with new orifices equal the need for Inara to leave the Guild? It's an important step, there's not doubt about that...just an odd timing scheme;)

Still...Simon actually talked to Kaylee without screwing the pooch...Inara was open with Mal about her feelings for him...definitely something in the air recycling system:D

BEB
Wednesday, 04 July 2007 14:52
For a moment there, I thought Inara was going to call Mal a nerf-herder! LOL!

This is a really good story!

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