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SECOND CHANCES: Chapter 11

Saturday, June 2, 2007

The hunt for Kaylee's family continues. River makes a decision regarding her sanity and Eli admits he was wrong. Simon/Kaylee, River/Rafe, Mal/Inara

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A/N: Thanks to Kaynara and Leiasky for the beta.

Keep commenting ... pretty please, with strawberries on top??!?!?!

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Chapter 11

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Mal wandered into the galley, glad to find it deserted. He needed time to sort through this impossible mess they had found themselves in. With a heavy sigh, he headed for the stove, putting on a pot of water and pawing through Inara’s stash of tea bags. She always kept the fruity ones near the top, but he had long ago cultivated his own taste for the bitter leaves and found that Earl Grey suited him just fine.

“You like the other flavors, too. You just won’t admit it.”

The voice that floated to him should have caused him to jump or maybe tense for a moment. But it didn’t; wondering if that meant he was growing soft in his old age, he waited until the kettle had boiled and then poured two cups of the steaming liquid. Turning from the stove and heading to the table, he placed one in front of River. She had drawn her knees up to her chest, folding herself into one of the chairs like a rag doll. With her big and all-knowing eyes she regarded him steadily, ignoring the hot liquid as Mal sat down heavily beside her and blew on his own drink.

“Be that as it may,” he answered, after taking a sip and burning the very tip of his tongue. “I can’t be lettin’ folks know I do. Ruin my image.”

River kept her silence for another minute as she watched him take another hesitant sip. While she had been trying over the past few days to keep a lid on her abilities to read others, she found Mal’s emotions strong, swirling on the surface in a myriad of colors that forced her to pay attention. Which was why she knew he cared as much about his image as he cared for Badger, who was still tied up on the deck below.

Resting a light hand to his arm, Mal glanced to her as she whispered, “That got ruined the minute you took on a crazy girl and her brother.”

Mal started to refute her claim and

Comments
Saturday, 02 June 2007 03:15
God, I hope it's good news.

Great chapter, I'm glad Simon's got the Butlers there to help, I like them.
Mal's plan has me concerned, he can't take down slavers with a three person assult. And not taking River isn't going to help. But I think I know how that situation is going to end. (Not gonna say it, that would be rude.)

Please update really soon!
Saturday, 02 June 2007 06:57
Yay!

Mal and Zoe will attack from one side and Jayne will use his patened one man flanking manouver ;p

I'm really enjoying this story, hope to read more soon.
Saturday, 02 June 2007 09:07
I really hope Mal and the crew come out of this okay. Their merry little band is shrinking and facing the *wangba dans* who snatched Kaylee's family may be a lot harder to do than they think. And poor River, I hope she manages to calm down and realise that her life is much more than a pile of mistakes caused by one too many cuts of the Academy's knives. Very pleased Simon and Kaylee have Eli and Evelyn. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 02 June 2007 11:31
Aw, River's crisis was heartbreaking. And poor Rafe, seeing her chose Mal. He tries so hard, bless him. I really like Rafe - enough to forgive you for the aliteration! ;)

And of course, the conversation between Simon and Eli wa lovely. (Although, MORE ALITERATION! lol)

Very good chapter, keep it comin'!

TEN!

xxxxxxx
Sunday, 03 June 2007 02:30
Definitely one of the most heart-breaking things I have ever read, TamSibling...River's conversation with Mal and Rafe about never being normal and supposedly never having the chance to fall in love because her powers cause too much pain when she's surrounded by emotion:(

And I have to say that the Simon-Eli conversation was brilliant as well, in that I am glad Simon's got surrogate parents/confidantes in Eli and Evie. Eli's apology to Simon for ever doubting Simon's POV about his parents really shows just how much better Eli is as a person and as a father figure:D

BEB

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