Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Shuttle Two

Friday, June 1, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. First in a few single fics just taking place during the night Serenity leaves Lazarus. This one - Jayne and River spend their first night in their new home. Please let me know if you like/dislike. Thanks!

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River snuggled close to Jayne, her head on his chest, her fingers making curls from the hair across his pectorals.

His heartbeat was returning to normal, and he tried hard not to fall asleep after their first love-making session in their new home. So far they only had a couple of mattresses on the floor, but it was theirs.

“Ballet.”

“What?” He looked down at her.

“You were wondering how I became so supple.”

He grinned. “Was I?”

“When I lifted myself around and -”

“Yeah, well, maybe I did.” He chuckled, the sound vibrating through his skin.

She felt it touch her. “I was three when I started classes. I loved it, learning all the new dances, and I wanted to …” Her voice faded and her fingers stilled.

“What, moonbrain?”

After a long pause, she said, “I wanted to be a ballet dancer. To twist and turn, and arabesque …”

“Ara-what?”

She slid from the bed and his embrace, leaving him feeling cold. As he watched, she went up onto her toes, her body seeming to lengthen, tauten, and she reached out. Then she danced, just for him.

Dipping low, one leg stretched high out behind her, her naked form catching the small light and making it special, sweeping her arms across at waist height, palms upward, dancing to music only she could hear.

He felt his body tightening, despite the exertions of just a short while ago, his eyes raking across her form.

Around the interior of the small shuttle she moved, creating shapes that should have been impossible as she executed plies and entrechats, the smoothness of her body glistening in his gaze. Finally she sank to the deck, one leg bent gracefully under her, the other stretched out, her torso leaning over it, arms laid elegantly along her calf.

“River,” he groaned, getting to his feet. He held out his hand.

She grasped his fingers and allowed him to lift her to her feet. She was barely breathing hard. “Did you like it?”

“That … that was gorram beautiful.” His voice caught in his throat as he pulled her into him, pressin

Comments
Friday, 01 June 2007 11:14
This made me laugh. Usually I am not keen on a Jayne/River pairing but you brought a lovely lightness to the dialogue and made it work. Now, next chapter, Mal/Freya right? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 01 June 2007 12:39
Aw, you gotta love sentimental Jayne now and again! Good job!
Friday, 01 June 2007 16:28
This was terrific because it gives us great insight into just how much Jayne loves River. It also shows us that River is not fully well, but well enough to love and be loved. I love the idea of her seeing a multitude of futures for them all. Very intriguing ...
Saturday, 02 June 2007 07:35
Ya know...I've read quite a bit of Rayne fic since stumbling across it a while back. And while the smutty tales and story parts are all kinds of shiny...it's tales that look at moments like these that really help to prove that Jayne and River can be wonderful together and that Jayne can take River's cracked sense of self and just soar with it:D

Beautiful work here, Jane0904! Really can't wait to see more;D

BEB
Sunday, 02 March 2008 04:41
Like River I can see so many possible pairings....I like this one with River and Jayne..it feels like what it would be...I too like the thread that River will always be a bit different..thanks for sharing
twi

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