A/N: Thanks to Leiasky and Kaynara for the beta. Please leave comments - I beg of you!
Hissing softly, Kaylee did her best not to squirm as her daddy patched up her knee.
“Easy there, baby girl,” he told her soothingly, doing his best not to aggravate the cut. “You did a right fine job gettin’ banged up.”
Glancing disparagingly over her shoulder at the regulator she’d been fiddling with, the twelve-year-old muttered petulantly, “Stupid part. I was just tryin’ to brace it so I could work on the innards.”
“Yeah, well, next time how’s about you ask for some help?” Jimmy Frye teased lightly, knowing the likelihood of his little girl admitting she needed aid were about as good as he doing the same. Stepping back, he packed away the first aid kit he always had on hand and told her, “All set. Why don’t you head home an’ help mama with supper?”
Flashing him a look that was one part sympathy and about ten parts angry, she told him sternly, “I ain’t one o’ them girls, daddy. I don’t like cookin’ or cleanin’ or any o’ that other go se. I wanna work on machines.”
“Language,” Jimmy scolded, turning from her to put the kit away so she wouldn’t see the smile of pride that lit his face. That was his good girl. Her brothers had never shown any type of interest in working in his shop, covered in grease and learning the ins and outs of what makes things tick. But not his lil’ Kaylee. She’d taken to this work like a duck to water and it swelled Jimmy’s heart with pride every time she completed a new repair.
Of course, she’d long ago surpassed him in the brains department – his girl wasn’t only gifted, she was powerful smart and gorram beautiful. That smile of hers could light up the darkest night and her big green eyes were always shining with happiness and joy. She was quite literally the apple of James Frye’s eye. He didn’t care if she ever learned to cook or clean, although he knew
Great chapter, I like how Eli has finally seen how shalow the Tams are in this story. Although I wonder if there is ever going to be a fanficton that show the Tams as loveing parents how made a terrible mistake, and not just as terrible people.
I hope Simon and Kaylee work out this problem. Kaylee sad and stressed it perfectly reasonable considering what she's going through. But cutting yourself is bad... as in not good :p
I can't wait to see what happens. Please post chapter 10 soon. If I comment again will it be uploaded fatser? ;p
You can't take the sky from me
Really liked reading the dinner party scene, I love Eli, and it was great to see how he compares to Simon's real father.
Damn those Tams!
Wonderful. As always. xxxxx
This is great, an awesome mix between sad and Silee. I do prefer the Silee though, because a sad Kaylee is a sad me. (And probably anyone else who watches the show).
Simon 'my universe' line was very aww worthy.
Kaylee looking at the babies was heartbreaking. I still think you shouldn't let her have children for a good long time - prolong the angst, you know! :)
I definitely had a big grin plastered on my face while reading the flashback scene with Kaylee and her dad in his workshop. Really warms the heart to see how close Kaylee and her dad are;)
Gotta say though...I was so waiting for Eli to just...eviscerate...Gabriel and Regan for their comments. The amount of restraint you gave him must border on the saintly, because most people would have had Eli just verbally berate them for their unfathomable shallowness and cruelty. Much as the Tams generally get the label of heartless bastards...I get the feeling that is what Joss wanted to have happen: it become obvious that the Tams Senior are too ensconced in their high-society life to realize the truth about family and happiness:(
BEB
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