Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Thin Ice - Part VI

Tuesday, May 29, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. It's a special day, but maybe Mal hasn't remembered ... enjoy, comment, rate, and thanks!

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“Mal, got something to ask ya.” Jayne stepped out into the sunshine.

Mal turned, a cup of coffee in his hand. “You know, I could get used to this,” he said, smiling a little. “Seeing the sunshine first thing.”

“Nah,” Jayne said. “You’d get land-crazy after a while.”

“Maybe.” Mal shrugged. “Still, nice to have some place to come to occasionally.”

“Yeah. Look, Mal …” He stopped.

“Whatever it is, you’d better come out and say it.” Mal looked at him. “You planning on leaving?”

“No!”

“Well, that’s that out of the way. Now maybe you can tell me what it is.”

“River’s … she don’t want to move in with me.”

“And you want me to persuade her?” Mal shook his head firmly. “Your love life’s your own affair.”

“No, it ain’t that. It’s my room.”

“Your room.”

“She says there’s too many people in it.”

“Right.” Mal took a sip of coffee. “Too many people. Course. Sure. Why not.”

“She ain’t being crazy, Mal. And they ain’t real, just … memories. All the women I’ve paid for, and all the nights there weren’t one on hand, so to speak.”

“So you move into her room.”

“That ain’t gonna happen.”

Mal suppressed a grin. “Simon?”

“And Kaylee. And the squirt. Hell, Mal, I ain’t gonna be able to let myself go with them right next door.”

“So what’s your solution?”

“I was wondering … could I set up home in the shuttle?”

“The …” Mal stared at him. “My shuttle?”

“Yeah.”

“Jayne, I -”

“I mean, I’d pay. Well, maybe not pay as such, but ya could give me a smaller cut of the money we’re making. And it’d still be around for ya to use if ya needed to. And my girls’d be there, so if we needed firepower on a job we wouldn’t need to -”

“Jayne, stop.”

The big man ground to a halt. “It ain’t like you never rented it out before.”

“Inara was a businesswoman.”

“That ain’t what you used to call ‘er.”

“What I called her is between her and me.” Mal took a deep breath and held it for a long moment. “You think this is the only way you and River can be tog

Comments
Tuesday, 29 May 2007 11:29
This is, as always, lovely. Very much liked the Mal/Jayne talk about the use of Shuttle Two. And I can't wait to see what Mal has planned for Freya!
Tuesday, 29 May 2007 14:56
I love your fluffy fics! There just so very sweet!
Tuesday, 29 May 2007 16:32
This was terrific! I love the conversation between Simon and Zoe and his assertion that now Bethany will think Zoe can work miracles. She's two - that's what she's supposed to think!

And what exactly is Mal planning ... Something tells me Freya's going to LOVE it!
Tuesday, 29 May 2007 16:38
I was really happy that Mal had no problem in letting Jayne and River move into the shuttle, and without charging him for the privilege. Zoe playing surgeon on Bethie's puppy doll had me smiling fit to bust, she is going to make one brilliant mama. And Freya, thinking Mal had forgotten their anniversay when he's been planning a surprise all along. Ah, this is what content feels like! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 30 May 2007 02:19
Oh...this was some fabulous stuff here, Jane0904! Definitely some of your A-game material:D

Have to admit...I honestly thought Mal was gonna take a little more persuading to acquiesce about letting Jayne and River take over occupancy of Shuttle Two - Shuttle One is rightly off limits because of the lingering psychic energy from Inara and her small multitude of clients - but I am glad he's willing to let them use it as long as it can be deployed for work or emergency reasons quickly;)

And Zoe's repair of Bethie's puppy toy? Utterly wonderful moment that: a) proves Zoe's gonna make a wonderful mother; and b) will probably come back to bite her in the bum when she has to fix someone's injury - probably Simon's - and she can't work the same kind of magic. Two is a fun age for developing a level of trust with a child;)

BEB

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