Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

SECOND CHANCES: Chapter 7

Saturday, May 26, 2007

The truth about what happened to Kaylee's family is brought to light - and it's bad. Mal/Inara, Simon/Kaylee, River/Rafe.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3142    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N: I have to say all the speculation regarding Regan and Gabriel just tickles me, because it is normally I who is being accused of being far too hard on them ... but you guys are ready to just hang 'em up by their thumbs! *squee* I love it.

Thanks to Leiasky and Kaynara for the beta and encouragement. Please, please, please comment ... my terrifying space monkies have been mighty restless as of late and I'd hate to send them after ya ...

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Chapter 7

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“Kaywinnet Lee Frye, you get back ‘ere righ’ now!”

Sweat pouring off her forehead, seven-year-old Kaylee scrambled up the ladder in the barn, basically throwing herself into a pile of hay. Curling into a ball, she peered back over the edge, scouting the space below for her mother and the angry wooden spoon she had clutched in her hand and breathed a sigh of relief when the coast appeared to be clear.

Flopping back into the soft, but itchy fiber, Kaylee panted a bit, wiping her sweaty hair off her face and neck. Summer’s on Harvest for so gorram hot; even with her shorts and tank top on she was still burning up.

“What’d ya do?”

Sitting up abruptly, her big, green eyes wide with fear that she’d been caught, Kaylee glanced to her side and took in the sight of her eldest brother. His lean, fourteen-year-old frame was propped up on one elbow as he regarded her with his usual gaze, a cross between bemusement and brotherly annoyance.

Blushing furiously and hoping that the slight sunburn she’d gotten that morning would hide it, Kaylee glanced to her lap, her fingers absentmindedly twirling a piece of straw. “Nothin’,” she murmured sullenly.

Swinging his legs underneath him, Martin Frye, more commonly known as Marty, cocked his head to one side and regarded his little, albeit, not quite innocent sister. She was always managing to get into some trouble or the other, although at the moment he was just thankful she hadn’t roped him into getting

Comments
Saturday, 26 May 2007 05:19
Whoa...some mighty big bombs you've dropped here, TamSibling. Much as I am glad you didn't sink to the cliche and have the Tams Sr. be the baddies...I can imagine that things will not be anything near smooth for Mal, Zoe, Jayne, River and Rafe:(

I must say that Mal's comment to Kaylee about her status as a crewmember no longer being valid. Biggest frigging "Oh no she didn't!!!" I have ever uttered in my life...and so worthy of Our Man Joss! I would have given all kinds of shiny coin to have seen Nathan and Jewel do this scene...just for the reaction shot of Kaylee hearing Mal's words. Emmys would have rained from the sky for THAT little moment;D

BEB
Saturday, 26 May 2007 05:20
Well, you got me at the edge of my chair. This is all real great stuff.

I just hope that the last line didn't imply any altruism on their behalf. I'm probably one of the few people reading that who DON'T want Regan and Gabriel to be turned into rote villains. You are way better than that.

Keep up the good work.
Saturday, 26 May 2007 05:22
Aww, that was way too short, then again, 12 pages would be too short.

I'm glad Kaylee's family weren't hit by Reavers, at least slavers should be easier to kill.

That opening was adorable and heart-breaking. Please update soon!
Saturday, 26 May 2007 09:48
Really good, as always. So heartbreaking to see Kaylee and Simon fighting :( And what Mal said. *BIG GASP*

One thing though, Badger isn't Irish. He's Cockney. BIG difference.
Saturday, 26 May 2007 21:53
What a can of gorram worms. Poor Kaylee. I love the way the whole crew is affected by what has happened and am glad that River is going with Mal and the crew to shake Badger into giving every bit of information he has about the slavers respsonsible. What a piece of vermin he is to gloatingly profit from such a terrible situation. I hope all our crew come back safely and with Kaylee's folks in one piece too. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 27 May 2007 00:40
Sorry, I've been reading, no time to comment...love the twist (Kaylee's parents getting taken by slavers) didn't see that coming. The Tams seem innocent enough, but I'm still wondering who is was really behind the kidnapping.

Killer proclamation from Mal to Kaylee.

With Inara missing her daughter and Kaylee not getting pregnant yet, maybe they can open their hearts and homes to a few of the children at the orphanage. After of course, Mal gets over his heart attack.

I love River/Rafe or River and any loving OC. She so deserves that!

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