Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Thin Ice - Part II

Friday, May 25, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. 2BF. Bethany has a little accident, and there may be a new member of the crew ... hand on heart, I need comments!

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“What’s wrong with moving to my bunk?” Jayne glowered down at the young woman.

“You don’t really want me there.” River walked on, forcing him to follow.

“I do! Else why’d I ask?”

“It’s your place, Jayne. And I wouldn’t want to intrude.”

“You mean you’d want me to take down all my guns?”

“No.”

He was confused. “Then what? River, we’re a couple, right?”

“Yes.” She smiled at him. “Most definitely a couple.”

“Right then. Seems to me a couple moves in together.”

“Not always. Sometimes they just date.”

“Think we’ve got past that, somehow, moonbrain.”

“You could come to my room.”

The look on Jayne’s face made her giggle. “With your bro and Kaylee across the way?”

“Well, perhaps that might be problematical.”

“Then you come to my bunk.”

“No.”

“Why?” He took her arm, made her stop. The light through the trees was dappling on her skin, but he kept his mind on the matter in hand. “Ya sleep with me there.”

“I do.”

“We make love there.”

“We do.”

“Then why not move your stuff in?”

“It’s not my bunk.”

“Hell, girl, it can be!”

She gazed at him, wishing she could make him understand. “It’s not mine,” is all she could say.

“Then we make it yours.”

She shook her head. “I can’t,” she whispered. She turned and ran away from him.

He stared after her. “River, wait,” he shouted, following.

“Can’t.”

“Dammit, moonbrain, you hold up!”

She could hear anger in his voice, and it slowed her feet. She didn’t want to make him angry, not because of what he could do to her, but what he wouldn’t. “Holding,” she whispered.

He came up behind her, turning her to look at him. “Look, if’n you don’t wanna move in with me, that’s … well, that’s okay, I guess. But you don’t run away from me, no matter what. You got a problem, you talk to me. Dong mah ?”

“I understand.” She hung her head.

“Then you look at me.” He lifted her chin. “You ain't gonna hide no more.” Pushing her hair behind her ears, he looked into her eyes. “Tel

Comments
Friday, 25 May 2007 22:51
I gotta say, Jane0904....you raise a mighty reasonable issue with River's lack of interest in sharing Jayne's bunk with the big lug. For a psychic like River, Jayne's bunk must just bleed emotions related to sex and physical need. Can't imagine it being pleasant to have that kind of input fogging up one's brain to be the best thing. Would imagine the issue would be the same for Mal and Inara, were they to hook up;)

The scene surrounding Bethany's broken arm was well structured, as we get both the parental angst from Simon and Kaylee and the overpowering cuteness of Bethany when she brings out the big guns. Though the additional fire support from her Aunt River was utterly fabulous:D

BEB
Friday, 25 May 2007 23:26
Somehow knew there'd be a dog on Serenity at some point! Mal is just defenseless against those eyes!
Friday, 25 May 2007 23:26
Somehow knew there'd be a dog on Serenity at some point! Mal is just defenseless against those eyes!
Saturday, 26 May 2007 04:08
Oh, of course Bethie's going to get Mal to do all kinds of things with those big eyes and that cast! And he shouldn't be surprised - she's just like her mama!

I can't wait to see a little puppy running around Serenity - a beagle, perhaps? They have smallish droppings. This was great, just a great bit of fluff and I loved Mal and Freya's banter at the end!
Saturday, 26 May 2007 05:16
Oh, I just know they are going to get the cutest puppy but also suspect they'll slip up and it will grow into a huge, enormous, gigantic behemoth of a dog - probably a Newfoundland or something equally mountain sized! How could Mal resist little Bethie with her all tearful and turning those hopefull little eyes on him? Man was a gonner the moment she did that, not that anyone else would have been able to withstand that little girl's pleas. Know what? She's using gorram wiles on him. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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