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Thin Ice - Part I

Friday, May 25, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. With Serenity still grounded, there's fun and fluff coming. Mal and Simon chat ... Please be nice and comment, and there may be a 2BF coming up ...

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Mal had taken his boots off, and his socks, and was now sitting on the end of the small dock, letting his feel dangle in the water.

“You know, you could go the whole hog and go swimming,” Simon said, walking up behind him.

“Nope, this is fine,” Mal replied.

“You’re virtually healed. It wouldn’t hurt.”

“You can promise that?” Mal smiled as the young man sat down next to him, resting his forearms on his knees and lightly clasping his hands.

“As your doctor I can promise you, light exercise would do you good.”

“Been getting that. Only it wasn't that light.” Mal smirked, and had to stifle a laugh as Simon blushed. “You know, you gotta get that under control.”

“I never had a problem until I came on board your boat.”

“You saying we corrupted you?”

“Big time.”

“Glad we could be of assistance.”

“So you could swim. Unless those scratches on your back have become infected.”

“Nope. That cream of yours seemed to do the trick.”

“And you’ve got no more?”

“You want a blow by blow description of my love life, doc?” Mal asked.

“Not particularly.”

“Then, no. Frey’s calmed a bit the last couple of nights. Now she knows Ethan’s fine.”

“I'm glad.” He truly was, too.

Mal gazed out at the mountains fringing the world. “Sure is pretty here.”

“Yes, it is. I'm not surprised Inara wanted to stay.”

“Oh, I think there’s more than just its good looks, doctor.”

Simon nodded, perfectly aware of the feelings of all involved. He glanced down at the water. “Is it cold?”

Mal shrugged. “It’s okay once you get used to it.”

For a moment the young man paused, then pulled off his shoes and socks, rolling up the bottom of his pants legs. Gingerly he lowered his feet into the water.

Wo de mah !” he muttered.

“Yeah, but it gets better.”

“When?”

“’Bout the time your toes fall off from frostbite.” Mal wriggled his, looking down at his bare feet. The water was so clear he could see all the way to the bottom. “Fed by the mountains, according to Monty.”

Comments
Friday, 25 May 2007 12:13
I really enjoy peaceful Mal/Simon moments. They're hard to find in most fics. Thanks for sharing!
Friday, 25 May 2007 16:26
This was a wonderful conversation between Mal and Simon. It conveyed so much information and emotion in a short span and it's something I could totally see happening, especially considering all they've been through together - and they fact that they're both fathers and husbands with people in their lives more precious to them than any other.

Brava!
Friday, 25 May 2007 20:39
I absolutely loved this very honest and open conversation between Mal and simon. It was so very nice to have Simon acknowledge and thank Mal for taking him and River in, and to have Mal thank him in return for saving little Ethan's life. Simon hit the nail on the head when he told Mal it was really all about family for him. I agree one hundred percent and thanks for a perfectly wonderful chapter! I also loved them just sitting and dangling their feet in the gorram water, nice to see them both relax for a while. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 25 May 2007 22:58
Absolutely perfect! And they are right. It's all about family.
Saturday, 26 May 2007 03:48
Gah! My comments keep getting eaten!

As I stated before, this was some utterly fabulous work here. Simon's remark about everything with Mal is about family was dead on, as Mal's character is very family-oriented in how he either becomes a close friend or someone you despise because of his habit of either doing everything he can to protect you or do everything he can to stop you dead in your tracks.

BEB
WOONSOCKET
Saturday, 11 October 2008 02:05
You write the best fluff. And angst, too. But fluff is good.

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