Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Picnic

Wednesday, May 23, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. The crew is still on Lazarus, and Mal and Freya take some time to have a little fun. This was in the pipeline anyway, but this is for AMDOBELL! Please comment, as my muse is threatening to leave!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3455    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“They need some time.” Kaylee glared at Simon.

“Mnn?” He rolled over.

“Mal and Freya. They’ve been through the mill with Ethan, and I figure we need to give ‘em some space.”

Her husband tried to unglue his eyelids. “What? What time is it?”

Kaylee glanced at the clock and shrugged. “Early.”

“How early?”

“’Bout two.”

“Kaylee, that isn’t early! That’s very, very late!” He shook his head. “Couldn’t this wait until the morning?”

“It is morning.”

“Kaylee …” he pleaded.

“I got an idea.”

“Good. That’s good. Can I go back to sleep while you think about it?”

“And you’re gonna help.”

“Oh. Great. Can it be when I'm actually capable of physically functioning?”

“Course, sweetie.”

There was a pause.

“What are you doing?” he asked as he felt her hands moving southwards.

“Well, I'm kinda awake now.”

“I'm not.”

“I could fix that.”

“Kaylee, I said I just wanted to snuggle.”

“That was last night. This is this morning.”

“Not so’s you’d notice.”

Her hand was busy under the covers. “Oh, come on, don’t be a spoilsport.”

“Kaylee …” He shivered involuntarily and groaned a little.

“See? I said I’d wake you up!” she said triumphantly.

He gave in. “Shadow of a man …” he murmured, taking her into his arms.

“Nah,” his wife grinned. “That’s the Cap.”

---

“You’re going out.”

“What?”

Simon finished his examination and did Ethan’s little shirt back up before looking at the Captain. “You’re going out. It’s all arranged.”

Mal’s brows drew together. “Not sure I’m understanding you, doctor.”

“Kaylee’s idea, and I happen to think it’s a good one.” Once I’d woken up , he added silently. “There’s a picnic hamper all ready, and you’re under doctor’s orders not to come back until at least dusk.”

Mal’s face cleared and his eyes twinkled. “Doctor’s orders, huh?”

“That’s right. And I’ll make you stay out longer if you don’t bring Freya back with a smile on her face.”

“That’s the kind of orders I don’t mind taking from you.

Comments
Wednesday, 23 May 2007 11:17
Absolutely perfect ending - loved Simon's scheme ending so off target! Another precious raft of fluff in the stormy sea of angst, and well done as always.
Wednesday, 23 May 2007 16:18
Thanks Jane0904, that was awesome and absolutely PERFECT! Loved it, loved it, LOVED it! And Ethan said his first word, and got it right too, calling Mal 'Dada'. Wonderful. I laughed earlier at Simon hoping Ethan would call Jayne Dada just so he could see the look on Mal's face. Hmm, methinks Simon's is an evil laugh though fate conspired against him this time, thank goodness. So happy to have some Mal/Freya goodness with no near death experiences or looming torture and such. And Ethan is happy and well, what more could a body want? MORE, that's what! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 23 May 2007 19:24
This was so perfect. Mal and Freya's banter was dead-on and I love the idea of Kaylee waking Simon up to get his help. And of course, the method she used - bwhahaha!

Plus, Bethany and Ethan are just adorable. And Yay for Ethan's first word!
Wednesday, 23 May 2007 22:55
Utter brilliance, Jane0904...simply utter brilliance:D

Between Kaylee's mehtod of persuading Simon to help out in her plan for Mal and Inara, to the picnic itself to Ehan just getting ever the more cuter by saying his first word (and what a word!)...I was tearing up for all kinds of reasons;)

Though it would have been interesting to have seen Mal's reaction had Ethan called Jayne "Dada" first;D

BEB
Friday, 25 May 2007 15:49
Whoops...just noticed Freudian slipped and said Ma/Inara, instead of Mal/Freya. I feel so embarrased:

:S

Just sub Freya in for Inara (like you already have, Jane0904;D) and everything should be shiny;)

BEB

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