Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Stealing a Kiss

Tuesday, May 22, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. And, for those who have waited a long time ... RAYNE! Definitely NC17, but I hope you like. Please, comment!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3858    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Inara had left them wine and food, but that was ignored. River was more interested in the bed, bouncing on it and laughing.

“Comes up to your expectations, moonbrain?” Jayne asked.

She gazed at him. “I think so.” She loved it now when he called her that. It meant something more than it used to, and she revelled in it. “I wonder what Inara’s doing?”

“Prob’ly shoutin’ at Mal. Reckon she misses that.” He looked at her as she lay back on the bed, her dark hair spread out around her. “Not that I care.” He fell onto the covers next to her, watching her face. “Ain’t her I want.” He put his hand on her knee, ran it up her thigh towards …

“No,” she said, sliding away from him and standing up. “I want to see you.”

“Hell, I’m here, darlin’.”

“No. See you.”

Jayne understood. He stood up slowly and came around the end of the bed, stopping a dozen feet from her. “You wanna see me naked.”

She nodded, not daring to speak.

“Whatever my bao bei wants.” Jayne stripped, taking his time and for once folding his clothes before dropping them onto the chair. Finally he stood naked in front of her.

She examined him closely, taking in his strong legs, the dark hair on his calves and thighs, the mass across his wide, muscular chest, his arms, those arms that held her so gently when she needed it, and his face. Only afterwards did she look to the base of his belly.

“River, this ain't exactly manly, standin’ here like this,” Jayne complained, feeling a twitch in his nethers.

“You’re beautiful,” she breathed.

“No, I ain’t. I got tattoos and scars, and some places it’s difficult to tell where one ends and another starts.” He touched the still raised area where Simon had shot him. “Ain't no way anyone sane’d describe me as beautiful.”

She smiled. “It’s a good job I'm not sane, then.”

“Sometimes, I think you might be closer’n most of us.” He put his hands on his hips, but decided that looked wrong, and crossed his arms instead. “Look, this ain't fair. You’re still

Comments
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 11:07
Wow, you really got into writing River and Jayne didn't you? The whole chapter just on them. The part funnily enough that touched me most was Jayne confessing that he wasn't sure he could be gentle and River assuring him that he could. Any finesse he doesn't have River will teach him. Well done, now when do we get a whole chapter of Mal/Freya goodness? Not that I'm impatientient just.. take your time, in a hurry-up kind'a way. LOL. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 12:44
cAn'T tYpe LoST bRaIn FunCTioN!!!
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 12:45
I'll be in my bunk.
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 15:33
Much as you know I'm a firm believer in Mal/River, that bit of Jayne/River was just hot, my dear! Well done!
Wednesday, 23 May 2007 02:43
Very hot and well conceived. I loved it! Thanks for making the build-up worth it.
Wednesday, 23 May 2007 03:47
Tian Yesu....you've blown my mind good and proper, Jane0904! I'm serious! This is some hot, HOT smut!

:D

Utterly fabulous work here, and for all kinds of reasons! Jayne's acquiescence to strip for River...River's tentative exploration of Jayne....Jayne's fear of not being able to be gentle with River. All of it was brilliantly written and exquisitely handled. Oh...and it was a fabulous pay-off, after all the dancing about that's been going on since starting this series oBf tales;D

BEB
Thursday, 24 January 2008 14:02
Dayum
Tuesday, 20 October 2009 12:59
hot! Hot!! HOT!!! tender, passionate, erotic smut!! Great writing.. Id say you had a penchant for p0rn.. whew!!

I know Im not leaving a lot of comments, but I want to get to your latest musings.. I feel so left behind, Im in a hurry to catch up. Just want you to know.. IM LOVING YOUR MAYA 'VERSE!!! Freya Absolutely FITS!!!

TOTALLY Agree with BK00.. Damn...

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