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SECOND CHANCES: Chapter 5

Tuesday, May 22, 2007

Kaylee throws Simon a surprise party - with the crew's help - and then everyone gets an unexpected ... and unwelcome surprise. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara, River/Rafe

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A/N: Okay, so we're five chapters in and now the plot really takes off - no one has so far guessed at what this story is going to revolve around, so I hope you like what I've cooked up!

Thanks to Leiasky and Kaynara.

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Chapter 5

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Simon shifted a bit in the seat beside Kaylee, again fidgeting with his cufflinks. “Kaylee, do you really think this is the best night for us to be out?” he asked, turning to regard her.

Taking a deep breath so as not to lose her cool, Kaylee turned to him with a placid expression and asked, “What, sweetie?”

Simon could read the tension tightening at the corners of her eyes and he tried to ease it by relaxing. However, the knowledge that his parents would be standing on his doorstep in under ten hours was damaging his normally collected demeanor. “My parents are arriving tomorrow,” he told her by way of explanation.

Squeezing his hand gently, Kaylee inched closer and pressed a kiss to his cheek as the hover rumbled along. “I know, sweetie. But there ain’t nothin’ more we can do to plan for ‘em. You already called to check on their reservation at the hotel an’ I cleaned the apartment from top to bottom.” Holding her hand in front of his face, she pouted slightly and added, “I even got the grimy fingernails to prove it.”

Smiling softly, Simon took the upraised hand in his and kissed each fingertip, before tugging her towards him gently. Placing a light kiss to her warm lips, he whispered, “I’m sorry. I’m trying to relax, I promise.”

Nuzzling her nose into his cheek, Kaylee told him, “Well then, maybe dinner with the Butlers is jus’ the thing you need. You know Eli and Evie always put you in a good mood.”

Resting his cheek against her hair, Simon released one more heavy sigh and then squeezed her close. “You’re right. A nice quiet night is just what I need.”

In their current position, Simon missed the flash of concern in Kaylee’s eyes at his statement.

Comments
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 04:25
Woah. First Simon's replacement is missing, then Kaylee's folks. Definitely getting interesting right now. Is it Inara's folks? I'm guessing it might be Inara's folks behind this.

Keep it coming.
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 08:35
Oh crap, I hope Reavers' didn't get them.

Apart from the growing panic, this was another great chapter.
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 10:26
Wow.

Drop that bombshell on us, why don't you.

I did NOT, in any way, shape or form, see that coming.

So congratulations.

And, as always, a WONDERFUL chapter.

tentententententen!

xxx
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 10:31
Oh no, all the shiny happiness of the surprise party is now overshadowed by what has happened to Kaylee's parents. Please let them be okay! My only disappointment was we didn't get any Eli in this part and Inara is so up tight in her refined way it's making me all manner of jumpy. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 15:25
bwahahaha. Ok, I loved the pissing contest between Rafe and Simon. Of course Simon is going to be protective of his sister. But River offering to get a ruler just made me giggle. AS IF she'd really want that information from her brother....Kaylee could simply tell her! Hee

Of course, you can't have a fluffy chapter without ending it on some dark note. . .

So the transport is missing. No honeymoon because there's no replacement for Simon and - no wedding because the parents are gone...good thing they had one night of relaxation. Because there isn't going to be any to come for a long, long time, if ever, if Kaylee's family isn't found.
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 22:23
reginaroadie --> I dunno...if the Serras - or the Tams - wanted to interfere, why not just detain the Fryes on Persephone and let their transport arrive on time? No....something more insidious is afoot and I definitely have to wonder how this will affect Kaylee:(

Brilliant work here as always, TamSibling! Definitely have to give you much props for giving us a balanced chapter, with the fluff being the predominant part...but with a smaller but more potent dose of angst. I know I know gave a hearty snort when River chastised Simon and Rafe for their pissing contest over Rafe's worthiness:D

BEB

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