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Where I Belong: Part III of VI

Monday, May 21, 2007

Kaylee is left to wonder what went wrong as they look for Simon. S/K.

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Author's Notes: Thanks to those who read and commented. Glad you're liking the story so far.

For those of you who care about such things, for obvious reasons, the POV had to change from Simon, in earlier parts, to Kaylee, going forward.

Thanks to http://www.fireflyfans.net/showprofile.asp?un=mal4prez>Mal4Prez for the beta.

Part I can be found:http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16528 >Here

Part II: http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16547>; Here.

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Where I Belong

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Part III

It was a dream. It had to be. All of it. From the moment Simon had pulled her into his arms and kissed her with such confidence and passion, to this moment, as she stared at the rubble that was now the entrance to the medical center. This couldn’t be happening.

Kaylee stared unblinking as the dust and the smoke cleared, as the burning buildings around her hemorrhaged people who’d thought they would be safe inside. Dimly, she heard a familiar voice, but she couldn’t tear her eyes away from the medical center. She’d seen Simon run towards it, but she couldn’t calculate just when. It had been a few minutes, right? He’d had time to get into the emergency ward before the entryway had been hit – hadn’t he?

She barely registered the strong hand that pulled her backward into the whitewashed building, or another hand joining the first to shake her into mobility.

“Kaylee?”

She turned unfocussed eyes on the dark-skinned woman. “Zoe?”

“Fiightin’s moved into the city. We need to make a run for the ship.” Kaylee felt herself being pulled deeper into the building. She knew there was an exit in the back of it, but when they reached it, Kaylee twisted out of Zoe’s grasp, eyes lighting with a horrified fire.

“No! Simon! We gotta go back for him. We –“

“Captain and Jayne are headin’ up there to get him an’ River –“

“No!” Kaylee cried, trying to force the words past her mouth. She knew they woul

Comments
Monday, 21 May 2007 16:47
I don't put it past you to kill Simon, but damn! This is killing me here - which I know was your absolute goal!

Unbelievable description of the violence and destruction wrought by the bomb and the desperation felt by Kaylee and the crew to get to Simon. Where exactly are Jayne and Mal? Something tells me Kaylee could use her captain right about now ...

And I loved River in this too - just cogent enough to be understood, but cryptic enough to guess a bit at the double-meaning.
Monday, 21 May 2007 18:28
The dichotomy between Kaylee remembering the night before and watching Simon being worked on is really incredible, makes for a very intense expierence...and I don't put it past you either. But I'm going to hate to see it happen if it does...
and yeah, where the hell are those guys?
Monday, 21 May 2007 19:57
Eeep.

Please don't kill Simon. Please?

You wouldn't....right?

Yeah, this was brilliant. And I have to agree with BigBadJayne - juxstaposing her remembering with her watching was a stroke of genius.

Cannot wait for more :D:D:D

Ten, of course.
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 05:39
Oh...this was all kinds of superb, Leiasky! The amount of tension and possible character death is unbelievable...though par for the course with anything you or Joss can dream up;)

Have to ditto what BigBadJayne and Chazzer said...all kinds of brilliant to have Kaylee think on her last happy moments with Simon as the doctors struggle to save Simon's life. And River's cryptic but lucid statements are still haunting me as I write this:S

BEB
Wednesday, 23 May 2007 03:46
Please don't kill Simon. Take Jayne instead.

And I know it's been said, but, that scene with Kaylee watching and rememering was very cool and saddening.

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