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Lazarus - Part II

Monday, May 21, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. A little angst and a lot of fluff, and Mal does some serious talking ... Please leave your comments - I'm addicted!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3436    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“That smells good,” Mal said, stepping down into the dining area.

Inara turned from the stove. “I wish I could say it was all my own work, but it isn’t. Mrs Boden is an excellent cook, and she’s put together one of her best meals.”

Mal sniffed the air. “Is that beef?”

“It is. Cooked in one of her special sauces. She’s given me full instructions, and it will be ready on time.”

“Somehow I don’t think anyone’s gonna be late for this meal.”

Inara grinned. “I’ll let Mrs Boden know your appreciation.”

Mal picked up a mug and lifted the coffee pot. “You do that.”

Inara watched him pour, then said, “I noticed Freya’s still limping.”

Mal’s hand paused, then he continued. “Yeah. Simon says it may never go fully, but … some days it’s better than others. When she’s tired or stressed it’s worse.”

“Is she?”

“Well, with Ethan and all …”

“Yes, I suppose so.” She covered the pot and put it back into the oven. “Mind if I join you?”

“Course.” He pulled the chair out next to him.

Inara poured herself a cup and sat down. “Is … is Freya all right?” she asked tentatively.

“Sure.” He took a mouthful. “Why shouldn’t she be?”

“Oh, nothing. Just a feeling.”

“Like I said, with Ethan just getting back to being …” He shrugged and stared into his mug.

After a minute of silence Inara said, “I'm sorry.”

He looked back up in surprise. “What? What for?”

“Slapping you. It was immature and entirely uncalled for.”

“Immature. Like sticking your tongue out at me.” His lips twitched.

“Exactly. I was a Companion. Companion’s don’t do that sort of thing.”

“You were. Ain't now. I think you can make up your own rules.”

“Then I should know better.”

“It’s alright, ‘Nara. And I'm the one who should be apologising. I kinda goaded you into it.”

“I shouldn’t have expected you to call me the minute Ethan got sick.”

“Maybe I should have. We’re friends.”

She smiled at him. “Friends.” She gazed at him, then added, “So why not tell me what’s wrong with you

Comments
Monday, 21 May 2007 11:05
Yay, at last Mal breaks through Freya's fear that making love will mean she won't hear if Ethan cries or is poorly. A fear I am sure any parent can relate to especially when it nearly cost their little one. So glad they look to be getting through that though I would have liked more Mal/Freya goodness, you seem to be rationing it in this fic! LOL. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 21 May 2007 14:14
Geez, who could resist the man for long? Lovely chapter!
Monday, 21 May 2007 15:43
That was great - all of Mal and Inara's banter was absolutely perfect and completely in character. As was Mal and Freya. I thought Simon's request to just cuddle was ridiculously adorable.

I'm also glad he was able to see River as a young woman and recognize that she's made her choice and it's okay. Just perfect all the way around!
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 02:36
Lots of fan service, I must admit. Though, I think in this case, the inclusion of moments between characters that address our concerns and/or desires are welcome inclusions;)

The conversations between Mal and Inara, and Mal and Freya were brilliantly done, Jane0904! I especially have to give you props for having Inara tell Mal he needs to be the one to talk with Freya about her fears about not hearing Ethan when he gets sick again if Mal and Freya are otherwise occupied. Much as Inara could have counselled Freya about her fears...Freya had a chance to ask and decided not to. Mal sought advice from Inara and he eventually acted on it. That and for not forgetting to have Inara get a twinge of pain about what she missed out on; much as they are now only good friends who see each other occasionally, Inara will never really lose the regret she carries and so it should be.

BEB
Wednesday, 23 May 2007 02:13
WOnderful portrayal of your Mal - Inara - Freya working relationship and very sensible at that. Wonderful writing as always!

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