Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Lazarus

Sunday, May 20, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Serenity lands back on Lazarus so Kaylee can continue her repairs, and preparations are made for the big night. I love to tease, but please leave comments!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3443    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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She barely waited for him to walk out of the Firefly.

“Why didn’t you call me?” she asked, hitting Mal in the chest with her fist.

“Ow.” He rubbed the spot. “Nice to see you too, ‘Nara.”

“Why didn’t you tell me as soon as Ethan got sick?” She was very, very angry with him. It had started the moment Hank had waved that they were coming, and had grown every passing second.

“Kinda had other things on my mind,” Mal pointed out.

“That’s no excuse.” Then she realised what she’d said. “Well, of course it is. But would it have hurt for someone to wave me?”

“Why, ‘Nara?” Mal asked. “Just so’s you could worry too? And you couldn’t even be there.”

“I still wanted to know! It was Ethan, for heaven’s sake!”

“Yes. My son. Mine and Freya’s.”

“So … what? I'm not family any more?” Inara stared at him.

“Course you are.”

“Then –“

“Because you couldn’t do anything. And worrying from a distance ain't good for your looks.”

“My …” This time the anger bubbled over, and she let fly with the flat of her hand, catching him right on the cheek.

He moved his jaw around but didn’t touch the vibrant red mark. “Better?”

“How does she put up with you?”

“She loves me.” He checked his teeth with his tongue. “You been working out?”

“What?”

“Seems to me you got more of a whack behind that than you had before.”

“One of these days …” Inara gave Mal one last glare then walked past him.

Freya, leaning in the doorway of the Firefly, laughed. “Don’t beat up on him too much,” she called. “He might get to enjoy it.”

“Hiya, Auntie ‘Nara!” Bethany yelped, running out of the cargo bay and past them all, heading towards the house.

“Where’re you going, honey?” Freya called.

“My room!”

“Don’t run!”

“’Kay!” Bethany was still going full pelt and disappeared quickly.

“It is still her room, isn’t it?” Freya asked Inara.

“Of course it is. And there’s a sweet little bed in there too, just the right size.”

“No wonder she’s in a hurry.”

Inara turned back

Comments
Sunday, 20 May 2007 11:06
I think I am the only one unhappy that Inara keeps coming back into this story but only because I have this horrible feeling in the pit of my stomach that she is going to put a spanner in the works between Freya and Mal. I hated it when she ranted and slapped Mal round the face for not telling her that Ethan had been ill. She needs to remember that Ethan is not her son, Mal is not her husband and get on with it. If she wants to be a friend let her be a friend. Okay, now that is off my chest I thought the scenes with Kaylee, Inara and Bethie were excellent, so true to how they would act. I was surprised that Inara has a maid/housekeeper. For some reason I thought she would run her own house herself. Loved the Jayne and River section but uh oh, I am all worried again by the way this ended, with something unresolved in Freya. I have a feeling that every time Inara sticks her nose in their lives a little more of Freya unravels. Please, Please, Please don't let anything ruin that little family dynamic of Mal/Freya and Ethan. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 20 May 2007 11:31
You're mixing up the angst and the fluff together? Looks like Inara is really needed in the counseling department. Another fine installment!
Sunday, 20 May 2007 17:26
Oh, I love the intrigue with Freya at the end. What is it that she wants to tell Inara and can Inara really help? I liked the fact that Inara's back and I think she was right to be put out that Mal hadn't waved to tell her. I don't know if she should of slapped him, but their banter was top notch.

I'm really glad Kaylee has someone to talk to again and that River and Jayne are moving forward with their relationship. Bring on the fun!
Monday, 21 May 2007 14:03
Am I the only one worried about the housekeeper? You know the saying...the butler did it! Anyway, I'll be keeping an eye on this one! Good work!
Monday, 21 May 2007 19:39
Gorram it! My comment got ate..again! Argh!

:(

And I have to disagree with you, AMDOBELL. I think Inara smacking Mal is just her weird way of getting back to a familiar pattern with her favourite roguish smuggler and ex-army sergeant. It's not the same as it once was because Mal's got Freya...but I think Inara's finally trying to have something where Mal's a good friend but she's not trying to jump his bones;)

Do have to wonder what's up with Freya? Cuz her tossaway self-targeted putdowns in her conversation with Inara makes me wonder if she's struggling with the idea that the next crisis - even if it's small - will cause her to go over the deep end. She came mighty close when Ethan was sick...tends to affect your self-worth when you can't do anything and/or you have a nervous breakdown:(

And I too gotta wonder what River wants to say to Rafe. The only think I can think of is she needs to admit to situaions like Niska's Skyplex, the Maidenhead Bar and Mr. Universe's Moon...her ability to kill without hesitation or major effort. It's one thing to know your GF is a Reader and has been abused by govt. scientists. It's another to know she's trained as an assassin.

BEB

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