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SECOND CHANCES: Chapter 4

Sunday, May 20, 2007

Kaylee tries to think of a way to ease Simon's anxiety over their approaching wedding while River shares some of her past with Rafe. Simon/Kaylee, River/Rafe, Mal/Inara

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A/N: The plot thickens and the angst builds ... here we go ...

Thanks to Leiasky and Kaynara ... you know why!

And keep commenting - it keeps me writing!

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Chapter 4

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“Sweetie, what’d ya think?”

Simon glanced over to his fiancée, unable to keep the smile off his face at her sated expression. Leaning towards her, he nipped a bit of wayward frosting off her lip with a quick kiss and teased, “You mean, I actually get a say?”

Swatting at him playfully, Kaylee giggled, and the sound warmed Simon’s heart. Sitting back from her, he watched as she curled her legs underneath her on the sofa, pulling a small notepad off the coffee table. “Well o’ course, silly. Now, we tried the chocolate-chocolate, which I know would be ‘Nara’s favorite,” she confided, consulting her list. “An’ the chocolate-coconut. Then there was the vanilla-raspberry, the vanilla-lemon an’ the vanilla-strawberry.”

Looking back to the tray on the table before them, Simon saw the remnants of their cake samples, a few drops of icing and crumbs. Stroking his chin thoughtfully, he sat back and pondered. “Well, the chocolate-coconut was awfully good.” Catching Kaylee’s pout out of the corner of his eye, Simon pulled her towards him and whispered, “But the vanilla-strawberry was the best.”

Squealing with excitement, Kaylee kissed him soundly, wrapping her arms around his neck and pulling herself flush to him. Simon returned her ardor with equal fervor of his own, delighting in the sweet taste the icing had left in her mouth. Pulling apart as they needed to breathe, Simon rested his forehead to Kaylee’s and told her, “I am so in love with you.”

“You are, huh?” Kaylee teased lightly, starting a gentle line of kisses from his jaw to his ear. As she swirled her tongue around the lobe, Simon felt his insides quiver with delight and he sighed. “It’s a good thing I’m in love with you too.”

With his arms still around her, Simon held her even closer and pulled

Comments
Sunday, 20 May 2007 07:27
And now I'm panicing about what the other thing River wants to tell Rafe is.
Sunday, 20 May 2007 09:34
AWWW River amd Rafe are SO cute. I'm so happy - you've actually managed to make an OC I can actually see River with.

Kaylee's reluctance to spend Simon's money is just funny. It's exactly how I'd imagine she'd be, and I can know its gonna bug Simon as he tries to persuade her othewise. Aw. They are so the perfect couple. Especially the way you right them.

The 'cold feet' joke made me do this weird, supressed, snorty laugh type thing. Hee...

Well done, as alwasy :D

xxx
Sunday, 20 May 2007 10:17
Poor Simon, I can so understand his dread at what might happen when his mother and father try to take over the organisation of the wedding. I am hoping that having so many of Kaylee's family there will help to mitigate any unpleasantness. As for River, I am glad she has found happiness but can't help worrying about what she is holding back. Tiny bit of Mal and Inara but sweet, hope you include a bit more of them in future chapters. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 20 May 2007 18:26
AMDOBELL - Don't worry there is plenty of Mal/Inara ahead. But I have to give my favorite couple, S/K, their due. It is their wedding after all.

CHAZZER - So glad you like Rafe. I do too! :)
Monday, 21 May 2007 15:29
Kaylee throwing socks at Simon for his 'cold feet' made me giggle. That was so very like her!

And then her conversation with Eli about money was so funny. He's probably my favorite OC of yours. At least Kaylee will have the surprise party to plan so she's not thinking every moment about why she's not pregnant.
Tuesday, 22 May 2007 17:07
It happened again?!? For the same chapter?!? Ohhh....I am starting to get mighty cheesed at this:<

To boil my comments down to the bare bones, I will say the following:

1) Really gotta wonder if River's further news is about her "assassin" moments from "War Stories" and the BDM. Cuz it's one thing to know that your girlfriend is a mentally unstable psychic who has been abused by the govt. It's another thing entirely to know that same girlfriend can kill you with her big toe;)

2) Really loved how you had Kaylee act in regards to Simon's money being a shared resource, TamSibling. Definitely fits in perfectly with Kaylee's character and beliefs. Though I think some bending on the matter would make things easier on the two of them;)

3) The Mal/Inara scene was all kinds of brilliant, since we get to see Vulnerable!Inara and Compassionate!Mal coming to the surface and interacting beautifully before the final crescendo of Mal backhand commenting on their probable future as a married couple;)

BEB
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