Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Waiting - Part VII

Friday, May 18, 2007

Maya. Post BDM. 2BF. Ethan is out of surgery, and there is relaxing and talking. Mal apologises ... Thanks for all your comments on this story. There will be a little bit more about it in the next pieces, but mostly fluff to come!

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“He’s recovering well. In fact, much faster than I would have imagined.” Ethan’s doctor was impressed. “If you have decent facilities, you can take him back to your ship tomorrow.”

“We have,” Simon said. “I can look after him.”

“Good.” The surgeon narrowed his eyes a little. “Did you never think of becoming a doctor yourself?” he asked. “You seem to have a natural aptitude for it.”

“I … tried,” Simon lied, thinking quickly. “I was at MedAcad, but there were family problems, and I … things happened, I couldn’t go back.”

“You should consider it. You’d be an asset to any hospital.”

“Thank, but I have a place to be.”

“Your ship.”

“It’s not mine, but … it’s home.”

“Well, if you change your mind, let me know. I’d be happy to put in a good word for you.”

“Thank you.”

The doctor became efficiency itself again. “Just keep giving him the shots, and he should be up and about in a few days. Keep him calm, if you can, although I know what a boy that age can be like. I have twins myself.”

“I’ll try.”

“He’s healing very well.”

“He gets that from his mother.”

“Really?” The doctor turned to look into the small ward. “Then she’s very lucky.”

“That she is.” Simon held out his hand. “Thank you.”

“You’re more than welcome.” They shook. “Remember, the medical profession could use a man like you.” He smiled and walked away.

“He ain’t wrong,” Hank said, coming up behind him. “Though I kinda think we got the best end of the deal.”

“I just wish …” Simon watched Mal and Freya standing by their son’s bedside.

“You knew what to do, doc,” Zoe said, the other side. “You saved Ethan’s life as surely as that man did.”

“And you didn’t make him sick in the first place,” Hank added.

Simon smiled. At last. “You can try to talk me out of it all you like, but I’m going to wallow in the guilt for a while longer.”

Hank sighed. “You’re just waiting for little Kaylee to sex you out of it.”

Zoe swatted him with her hand. “None of that talk. We’re in a hospital.”

Comments
Friday, 18 May 2007 15:46
I loved this so very much, you have a wonderful way with bringing out all the things I love most about the characters. Of course I am dancing on clouds because Ethan is going to recover and they are all back on Serenity. I just adored the conversation between River and Mal when River walks in on the Captain apologising to Serenity for pushing the ship almost beyond her limits. The easy cameraderie between them is something precious and very natural which made it more affecting when Mal calls her daughter and River responds with blinding joy. That brought a little tear to my eye. Lovely. And I's glad that River told him about her feelings for Jayne. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 18 May 2007 17:37
Mal/River advocate that I am, I must say I enjoyed your father/daughter speech with them nonetheless! Beautiful writing, as always! My hat's off to you!
Friday, 18 May 2007 23:06
I loved the Mal/River conversation it was exceptionally fitting and beautifully written. I also really liked the resolution of Ethan's surgery and the bit with Bethany - 'cause you know, she's just the cutest. I am however very glad that there's some fluff coming up ... and maybe some smut? I'm thinking there's a bit o' Rayne you been dangling 'fore us? Hmmm ... ?
Saturday, 19 May 2007 01:27
The Mal/Serenity and Mal/River is some of the best writing I have ever read. I absolutely love the way you understand the characters and are able to express it beautifully.
Saturday, 19 May 2007 12:04
This may be my favorite chapter of your writing ever - so sweet and so on target. Loved the relationship between Mal and River and especially Mal and Serenity. Wonderful, wonderful piece of writing - you should be very proud of this one!
Sunday, 20 May 2007 02:22
Ya know, while I felt all kinds of warm and fuzzy about Ethan pulling through and using his maternally-inherited healing to get back into the swing of things...Mal's apology to Serenity was some of the absolutely most brilliant writing I have seen from you, Jane0904! I totally pictured Nathan during that scene, just talking to his ship and asking that one of the most important ladies in his life accept that the welfare of his son (and his wife, in an indirect way) forced him to put Serenity's "life" at risk. And the whispered "Good night" from Serenity? Definitely a grin-birthing moment;D

BEB

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