A/N: A big thank you to everyone who has continued to read and respond. There is quite a bit of angst in this little story, but hopefully enough fluff too.
Thanks again to Leiasky for the beta work and Kaynara for the continued encouragement.
I hope you continue to enjoy - AND respond! Don't make me beg people - it's just not pretty ...
Chapter 3
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“Rafe?”
Zoe descended into the engine room, scanning the small space for the young man. It still was a bit of a shock not to see Kaylee tinkering away or hear the young woman humming cheerily, but Zoe knew Kaylee was happier now, on Sihnon with Simon. And Rafe was good with a toolkit, had even managed to artfully get them out of a pinch a few weeks back when River had demanded some less-than-normal results from the engine. If Zoe hadn’t been sure about the young man before, that little maneuver had erased her lingering doubts.
“Rafe?” she called again, waiting by the door for the mechanic to step out from behind the spinning engine. Wiping his hands on a rag, it took him a minute to bring his blue eyes to Zoe’s face, but once he did, she suddenly understood why River had been so subdued all day. Their expressions were almost identical; Rafe too looked as though he’d lost his best friend.
“What can I do for ya, Zo?” he asked casually, crossing the room to toss the rag and his tool onto the workbench.
“We’ll be passin’ Verbena in a bit,” she told him, sizing him up as she spoke. “Cap’n wants to know how we’re lookin’ on fuel.”
Shrugging, Rafe kept his back to her and said, “We’re fine. Won’t need a refill ‘till after we’ve reached Sihnon.”
“All right then.” Zoe turned to go knowing whatever had the boy so troubled was none of her business.
“Is River all right?”
His quiet voice snapped her back like a rubber band. With a sympathetic expression, she turned to regard him and had to smile softly at the sheer emotion playing across his face. In truth, Rafe reminded her
Poor River, it's so sad to see that even once she's stopped 'suffering,' she's convincing herself that she still should be. I really like Rafe, like I said, he fits in well, and it's nice seeing someone be there for River. Saying that, I loved her conversation with Zoe, the two have more in common than they realise, and we didn't really get to see much of their dynamic in the series, which is sad. But you do it wonderfully here.
I wish Inara would get a clue that for once, Mal is right.
Oddly enough, I think there's less K/S in this chapter than anyone else. You've been converted!
But, as always, I love it. Keep it up :D
You can't take the sky from me
And I like that Mal and Inara are disagreeing about something so important. Not their usual rediculous arguements because they're both so pigheaded.
I was also much impressed with how you handled both the Mal-Inara and Zoe-River conversations. With the former, I was totally picturing Nathan and Morena just acting the hell out of this scene as we get to see a vulnerable Inara struggling to deal with her guilt, and a conflicted Mal wanting nothing more to give Inara what she wants - closure or a connection with her daughter - but knowing that Hell's path looks mighty shiny at first glance. With the latter, I was seriously impressed with the subtle mirroring you were doing between Zoe, who's been through this stage of a relationship before (presumably with Wash) and who also knows quite well now the dangers of being loved wholeheartedly by someone who's not really suited toward the Way of the Gun, and River...who's entering that oh-so-fun stage of loving someone with all she has but also recognizing that Rafe's gonna be a juicy target for people wanting to hurt her...or River herself.
A++ job here, TamSibling...can't wait to see the next part:D
BEB
You're breaking my heart, Sibling.
I worry the Tams will cause trouble at the wedding, please prove me wrong.
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