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Waiting - Part V

Thursday, May 17, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Serenity lands on Greenleaf, and the crew shows just how much they care about Ethan ... I am begging for comments, with my bowl held out high.

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“My name’s Simon Mara. I'm medic on board the Firefly transport ship Serenity. We have a medical emergency.” Simon leaned over the Cortex screen, staring at the woman whose image glared back.

“What is the nature of your emergency?” She was the epitome of efficiency, and no-one was going to come into her hospital without her say so.

“We have an eight and a half month old baby boy in severe cardio distress. His SA-node is failing.”

The look on her face softened a little. “Are you sure?”

He nodded. “He’s already had one seizure, and I'm afraid there will be more.”

“Do you know the cause?”

“Minuet’s.”

The woman nodded. “When will you be here?”

“Less than an hour.”

“Do you require an ambulance?”

“Yes.”

“Your docking port?”

“Havers Dock, no. 15.” Hank had already arranged it.

“A vehicle will be waiting. I’ll have our emergency team standing by.” She glanced down at another screen. “Do you have payment? This is, I'm afraid, beyond the normal level of statutory care.”

“As much as it costs.”

She nodded. “In an hour.”

The screen went to static.

“They gonna be able to do this?” Hank asked, retaking his seat.

“Greenleaf has an excellent medical facility, the best in the area. I'm sure Ethan will have the finest of care.” Simon went to leave the bridge.

“Doc, this is me you’re talking to. There ain't a one of us needs to hear that medical-type speech coming from you. Just answer the question.”

Simon sighed inwardly. “You know when I said I didn’t know about whether it was a good idea for Zoe to come out of the shuttle?”

Hank nodded slowly. “Right. I see.” His lips lifted in a humourless smile. “So the finest of care.”

“They’ll look after him.”

“They’d better.” Hank stared back out into the stars. “And the fee?”

“Jayne’s got an idea about that.”

---

“I can’t ask you,” Mal insisted.

“It’s for Ethan,” Jayne said, holding out the wadge of cash. “I ain't spent hardly any of it, and I … Mal, just take the damn money.”

Kayle

Comments
Thursday, 17 May 2007 12:52
Excellent chapter here, Jane0904! I loved the practicality of the crew helping pay for the surgery and the outsider's view of the crew from the admitting nurse - wonderful. Too much angst at that point to write it from the crew's point of view but just enough from the nurse. Fabulous bit of writing once again!
Thursday, 17 May 2007 13:29
I'm breathing a little easier now, but just a little! Very interesting that Bethie has inherited the gifts of River and Kaylee! She's a wonder!
Thursday, 17 May 2007 13:32
I don't know how you do it but you have outdone yourself here. All the angst about Ethan balanced nicely with the crew stepping up to pay for his care. The nurse's point of view provided the outsider's view.

BTW you were spot on with Mal's crying. He would hold it in until everyone left and do it privately. I cried with and for him.

Thursday, 17 May 2007 16:25
Okay, I'm going to say it again - I LOVE BETHIE! She is just the cutest damn thing I ever did see.

I really love the fact that she can feel Serenity's pain as well. That is so perfect, especially considering she's Kaylee's daughter.

I am very, very worried for Ethan still, but also a bit worried about the fact that they left Kaylee and Bethany alone on the ship ... granted, it's Greenleaf, but still.

And I really hope no one identifies Simon ... or River.
Thursday, 17 May 2007 20:15
I honestly have to say I am torn between saying the scene with the crew giving Mal and Freya their money to pay for Ethan's care - shades of "War Stories" and the ransom collection - and the final scene with Bethany and Kaylee bonding further in their mutual need to fix Serenity. Was honestly struggling with tears:D

Gotta say though...like TamSibling, I worried about someone recognizing either Simon or River, or someone using this situation to get aboard Serenity. Don't want to imagine how the angst level would skyrocket:(

BEB
Thursday, 17 May 2007 23:03
Gorramit, I was crying along with Mal so touched and proud of the crew for all chipping in to pay for what will likely be a huge medical bill - not that every credit won't be well spent if it helps to get little Ethan better. I loved Kaylee and Bethie both being able to hear Serenity. It figures that Kaylee's daughter would inherit some of her mama's talent. Ali D :~)
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