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Where I Belong: Part I of 6

Wednesday, May 16, 2007

Simon finds some stress relief in the middle of a town engulfed in a civil war. S/K

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Author’s Notes: This just came to me and I needed to get it out of my head, partially to see if I could get it to sound good enough as a stand alone, and partially to jump start my muse into wanting to finish the sequel to 'On the Edge', tentatively titled ‘Broken Wings’. I'm completely stuck on that, and so, the below will have to suffice until I can get going on that one again.

This was originally written as a 4 page short story and turned into a 26 page story with 5 parts. The below is Part 1.

Story notes: The movie doesn't happen here. And so the below scene takes place after the series end. Book and Inara have left the ship already.

Rated: R for brief description of adult activities.

Thanks to http://www.fireflyfans.net/showprofile.asp?un=mal4prez>Mal4Prez for the beta.

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Where I Belong

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Part I

It was the dead of night, but Simon Tam couldn’t tell, not with the constant bombardment going on outside the city. Flashes of light so bright it looked to be midday pulsed through the cracked windows. He'd gotten used to it, along with the resounding quakes that rumbled through every time a mortar struck ground. Maybe it was his exhaustion that made him numb to the sights and sounds of warfare.

Serenity had landed three days ago on this backwater world to finish a simple job, and had managed to land right in the middle of a civil war that seemed to have engulfed the entire planet. They'd been in town when the first bombs lit up the sky, and they hadn't been able to get out of it since. All access, roadways, and airspace had been cut off, and as the town's hastily formed militia had surrounded the area, Serenity's crew had found themselves boxed in.

They'd all managed to keep themselves occupied and relatively unhurt during the battle that was expected to last only a few hours - but had now extended into a third day. Both sides refused to negotiate, had refused an impartial arbitrator, and the Alliance couldn't be bo

Comments
Wednesday, 16 May 2007 22:56
Liked it? LOVED IT!

Uh, this was amazing. This was just what I needed - a little S/K ficlet that wasn't all sunshine and roses. I mean, I know there lots of fics out there with S/K angst, but there not many with INTERNAL angst, if that makes sense.

Simon was 100% true in this. And it just seemed like something that could really have happened... oh I've run out of ways to say it was awesome.

But it was awesome.

Can't wait for more! :D:D
Thursday, 17 May 2007 06:07
This is amazing! I love it when you write AU! I think Simon is so in character here. He always takes on so much and then doesn't let up when things get hard. But I feel like he can say the right thing to Kaylee and salvage this situation ...

Can't wait for more!
Thursday, 17 May 2007 07:58
I honestly thought he was going to screw everything up (as usual) when he woke up. But I am very glad to be wrong.

Very, very awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thursday, 17 May 2007 08:49
About time Simon, though as exhausted as he was it's impressive he managed to do anything other than collapse so apologises because it was quick is one thing he has no reason to feel guilty about but then this is Simon. I surely hope the war torn situation is soon resolved so he and Kaylee can get back to Serenity and the two of them can take their time with a deepening relationship. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 17 May 2007 14:56
>I honestly thought he was going to screw everything up (as usual) when he woke up.

There are 5 parts to this. Of course he screws it up. But then - Kaylee doesn't help either. . . And the war...no, that doesn't help either. . .

*smiles evilly*
Thursday, 17 May 2007 15:26
You've really spun a good one here LeiaSky! It's refreshing to see a different dynamic with these two, something between harlequin romance and the usual Simon screw-up. Kaylee shows her strength here too, almost taking over the situation with her playfulness and wandering hands...

It's very realistically and emotionally portrayed, and just sexy enough... ;)
Thursday, 17 May 2007 19:35
Brilliance...nothing but brilliance, Leiasky! The raw emotion coming from Simon, first from his need to save lives and then from his struggle to not give into his remorse for seemingly taking advantage of Kaylee's largess, was superbly crafted and totally in-character for Simon at this stage in the game:D

BEB
Friday, 18 May 2007 00:11
"Quick".......?

Bwhahahahahahahaha!

Simon with a case of the premies?

okay, now that I got that out....this was very good, as usual, but I hate, repeat hate it when things are open-ended like this....though it's what you're best at....lookin forward to the other chapters.....soon?

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