Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Waiting - Part III

Tuesday, May 15, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Simon's feeling the pressure, and Hank is worrying about Zoe. Let's not go into how Mal and Freya are feeling ... more angst, and more to come. Please comment. Pretty please?

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Hank had increased their speed as much as he dared. He’d managed to pull a little more power and plot a better course, and he’d cut the time to Greenleaf to under ten hours, but it still seemed a hell of a long time. Longer for them downstairs, though.

Now he sat and stared out of the window, had done for more than a couple of those hours, out at the stars sprinkled across the sky like diamonds. No, not diamonds. Maybe the wishes of people. More like. And among them were wishes of his own. Whole-hearted ones that Ethan would be okay. And more guilty ones that he suppressed quickly on the lines of if any child died he didn’t want it to be his.

He checked the navigation once more, then got to his feet. He had to know.

---

“Kaylee?” Simon looked into the engine room.

“How’s Ethan?” his wife asked, bringing her head out from under the housing and rubbing her hands on the greasy rag at her waist.

“The same.”

“So what’re you doing here? Not that I ain’t pleased to see you.”

“I needed to stretch my legs. I can’t stare at those monitors any longer.” He smiled a little. “And I told Mal I needed to make sure you were okay.” He sighed. “To tell the truth I couldn’t take any more.”

“Mal and Freya?”

“I know we’d be the same over Bethany, but I can’t do anything right now, and it …”

“Makes it difficult?”

“Very.” He glanced at Bethany asleep in the hammock. “Worn out?”

“Worrying about Ethan.”

“So what are you doing in here?”

“Gotta keep my girl flying. Mal weren’t joking when he said about burning out the coil, and I don’t blame him. But if I can coax her along, maybe we won’t actually blow up.”

“Is there any likelihood of that?”

“The way Hank drives?”

Simon managed another slight smile which died as quickly as it was born. “I should’ve known,” he said, sitting down on the steps. “I should have realised it was something more than just a temperature spike.”

“How? You said it hides. And we might have the best doc in all the ‘verse, but you can’t kn

Comments
Tuesday, 15 May 2007 13:27
Looks like you're hitting the jackpot on the angst machine here! Another well crafted fic with interesting twists and turns!
Tuesday, 15 May 2007 16:23
Oh man! I adore Bethie - have I said that before? I might be repeating myself, but I don't care - she is just the sweetest thing and I love how much she loves Ethan. I feel awful for Mal and Freya, but the other moments scattered throughout took some of the sting away.

I'm glad that Jayne and River are getting closer and that Simon is able to admit his fears to Kaylee. That's a really big thing for a man like Simon. Keep it coming!
Tuesday, 15 May 2007 18:04
Oh...I am speechless, Jane0904! The level of brilliance you've shown here with how you have the characters act and think simply blows my mind. Though I seriously hope you give us some fluff in the near future:(

Honestly have to agree with TamSibling and say that Simon conversation with Kaylee was utterly fabulous and quite telling. A doctor of Simon's skill and intelligence would be beside himself from his perceived impotence. Though I am glad Kaylee was in fine form with her words of comfort to him.

Also, the Rayne moment was well done too, since we get to see the usually hidden vulnerable side of Jayne as he thinks on his actions in his youth concerning avenging his father and the consequences of said actions. Though what really hurt was River's acceptance that she can't go home to her family because of what they did/didn't do:(

BEB
Tuesday, 15 May 2007 18:08
Okay, so I admit it. You've made my cry twice. Once long ago, when Mal looked at the tarp and thought Freya was dead, and now when Bethie talks to Ethan. You are an evil woman, but I'm thoroughly addicted!
Tuesday, 15 May 2007 18:32
I'm a little confused, I thought Ethan got sick because Bethany had unwittingly passed on the virus from her contact with Halvorsens and now she manages to slip away from Kaylee without being noticed and into the very sick room she should be staying away from. On top of that Freya sits her on her laps and takes the dino from her for the baby. No wonder the alarm went off or am I the only one worrying that instead of making things better she is making things worse? I love Bethie to bits and hope she hasn't made things even more dicey. Please don't let Ethan die! Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 16 May 2007 07:48
AMDOBELL, it was Ethan went with Mal and Freya to the Halvorsen's, and picked up the virus from their son. Simon was worried Bethany might have picked it up *from* Ethan, but as Minuet's is only bad for under two's, she's not in any danger.

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