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THE HELLBOUND SERIES: 20. "Double Edged Sword"

Monday, May 14, 2007

"Mal speaks to Casey and learns something guaranteed to give him sleepless nights. On Persephone Badger takes time for a diversion while he waits."

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TITLE: "DOUBLE EDGED SWORD"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Canon pairings

RATING: G.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "WHEN ALL ELSE FAILS"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://unilelu.net/Alison/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Mal speaks to Casey and learns something guaranteed to give him sleepless nights. On Persephone Badger takes time for a diversion while he waits."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"DOUBLE EDGED SWORD"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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They were six hours out from Persephone. The wave with Badger had gone better than expected which made the Captain unaccountably jumpy. Zoe called him on it but he had no reason for the reservations building up in his mind. Jayne now joined them on the bridge. "Long as we get paid who cares what the job is?"

Wash looked at Jayne. "I care!"

Jayne shrugged, already bored with the conversation. "Need fuel, coin. Been so long since I had any trim I feel like my pecker's 'bout to drop off."

The Captain didn't say anything, he was staring out the window. Zoe waited until Jayne had stomped off then followed her Captain off the bridge. Wash gave her a questioning look but she gave a slight shake of the head. When he got to the commons room the Captain stopped and looked at her. "Any reason you're doggin' my steps, Zoe?"

"*Bu qu*, just you seem to have somethin' on your mind, sir."

Mal rubbed his head, the Preacher's words still running around inside his mind.

"Maybe you should see Simon."

He blinked. "*Weishenme*?"

"For that headache of yours."

"Zoe?"

"Yes, sir?"

"Go see to that husband of yours."

She looked at him for a moment then nodded. "Yes, sir."

Once she was gone he decided he cou

Comments
EPM0001
Monday, 14 May 2007 13:14
This is getting intresting. Keep up the good work.
Monday, 14 May 2007 14:56
Oh, very interesting. Now, just what is someone hiding in that little baby. . .

A few of the lines made me think of Star Wars (the good set of films, not the never-should-have-been-made last three)and I smiled fondly when reading those sections.

Looking forward to the next part.
Monday, 14 May 2007 17:41
I loved Mal's chat with Casey - just the right amount of embarrassment and sweetness. He is such a good man to get as a friend, and she was right to trust him.

Now, about this code ...
Tuesday, 15 May 2007 05:20
Ya know...I'm not really surprised that Casey was trying to pull a con. That little plot twist has been kinda politely sitting in the background, waiting patiently to get recognized officially and have its say. Noo...it's the "Casey's baby is a walking code key" plot twist that really jumped out and bit me on the nose. In a good way, mind you;)

Oh...and Mal was in fine form in his conversation with Casey. Definitely have to agree with Jane0904 and say that Mal had the right balance of prudishness and compassion. Just hope that the truth about Casey's situation doesn't make him wish that being ignorant would have been the better course of action:(

BEB
Tuesday, 15 May 2007 21:07
Really interesting twists and turns here. Not sure where it's going to end up, but that's most of the fun.
Saturday, 19 May 2007 11:47
I've been following this story with a great deal of interest and a great deal of discomfort. It's not the fact that there are sexual situations in the story, it's the "What the????" factor and the fact that Mal is being more or less molested that leave me wanting to scratch my head and withhold opinion. I'm not entirely comfortable with the way Mal is acting, either.

This chapter has me doing a lot of "ohhh, I get it!" I'm very glad Mal finally talked to Casey and got things out in the open, and he's acting more like himself.

"She leaned forward to rest her forehead against his. As that seemed to calm her he didn't move away. The Captain needed her to know that he didn't want to use her or have her use him. He wanted there to be an understanding between them."

I really liked that, it was very sweet and felt very much like Mal. I've personally never held the view that he was prudish about sex at all. Respecting women and not wanting to take sexual advantage don't equal prudishness in my book. I think you captured that well in this chapter.

I'm still reading with fascination and a little trepidation :) ;)

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